[Report This]Date: October 01 2020 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 8: A Little Man Lost
so glad there will be more and maybe fatal ass chapters. I have to say I love dark cruel ass plots more than anything, if the girl is totally unaware about it and makes it worse and worse. I just love ironic plots too, like she just looking into the mirror opening her arse crack with one hand and looking behind her back and sees nothing and then just let her hand go and the ass slams together and the micro particle boy just screams no wait im heere heeelp and then totally has a dumbfolded expression maybe when crack opens he thinks she heart him but she was just bending down picking up her underpants and he looks one last time into the mirror and sees her anus in the mirror with him the size of a lint or 100 times smaller... totally feeling lower than ever like a parasite. I also love scat plots and when it gets worse and worse over time, and him mybe even gets inserted into the anus or rectum, totally going trhough a hell plot and maybe dying in there.
Author's Response:
Well, it’s good to know where you stand as far as reading enjoyment. I think you’re going to like the next couple of chapters.
[Report This]Date: September 30 2020 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 8: A Little Man Lost
really loved the first half of this chapter, but why did you ruin it with him getting out of her ass, it would have been such an amazing epic plot from there. I would wish he gets maybe lost in her ass again or in another story with a horrible ending, I am not a fan of happy endings to be honest.
Author's Response:
It’s true, I could have left Nick inside Cassie’s ass for a longer period, but he’d eventually have to come out some point, or end up dying in there, and I’m not ready to end the story there....at least, not yet. 😉 Rest assured, however, I’m an ass man, too, And I like the thought of a character being sat on, or stuck somewhere between a giant woman’s ass cheeks. If you liked the first part of this chapter, I think you’re really going to enjoy the next couple. Trust me, this won’t be the last Nick sees of Cassie’s ass!
I know some people like to have sad, or tragic endings at the end of their stories. For me, it all depends on the situation, and if I feel the story needs to have a happy ending or not. All I can say is, not all of my endings are going to be happy.
For now, thanks for reading, and for the feedback!
Date: September 28 2020 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 8: A Little Man Lost
I know she's worried and emotional and all
But part of me thinks nls Cassie's being a bit of a bitch
She seriously needs to let Nick explain his side of things instead of trapping him a jar like a fucking insect
Author's Response:
I agree that Cassie isn’t considering Nick’s side of things, but she’s more concerned with his safety than his feelings at the present moment. Like I’ve mentioned before, I didn’t want Cassie to be some unrealistic “perfect, bombshell wife”; I wanted her to be realistic, and to act and react like a real wife would if faced with a similar situation.
Also, with Nick at such a small size, Cassie can’t hear or understand what he’s saying, so she can only go off of his body language. If you recall, she DID notice Nick’s displeasure about being put in that jar, but she was too concerned with his safety, and too upset to find a better alternative.
I know Cassie’s personality maybrub you the wrong way at times, but it those qualities that make her seem realistic.
I appreciate your feedback, and I hope you continue to read on.
[Report This]Date: September 26 2020 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 8: A Little Man Lost
Great chapter! So hot how Cassie put Nick in the glass jar! Love that kind of gentle domination/control.
Author's Response:
I was hoping some of my readers would enjoy the “glass jar” scene. I feel it brings a sense of realism to their situation as well. Cassie wants to keep Nick safe, so that might be an obvious choice. Besides, she threatened to do it before when he shrank himself too small in chapter five. It also won’t be the last time you see Cassie “punish” Nick for his recklessness either.
Thanks for reading, and for the review!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2020 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 8: A Little Man Lost
Great writing as always. Looking forward to reading the next chapter to see how things transpire.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: September 25 2020 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Little Birthday Present
With Nick so tiny, does he go farther in the pussy, can he breathe inside now that there is more space for him, or does he go in somewhere else? Great story, I like the interaction and where the story is going.
Author's Response:
He pretty much goes in the same place. As long as there’s room inside Cassie, there’s air, albeit stale air. However, he wasn’t exactly inside her for that long.
I try to strive for some degree of realism in my stories. Sure I take artistic license, especially with the resiliency of my main characters, but I really try to make things plausible and picturable in the minds of my readers.
Thanks for reading, and for the review!
[Report This]Date: September 23 2020 12:53 PM Title: Forward
Absolutely love this story! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I’m glad you’re enjoying it. Hope you like what’s to come.
Date: September 18 2020 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Little Birthday Present
Awesome chapter. Is nick gonna survive or was that splat meant to imply the end of him???
Author's Response:
Oh, the story’s not over yet. Nick’s troubles are just beginning.
Date: September 18 2020 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 7: A Little Birthday Present
Awesome chapter! Definitely nice to see some butt action. I can't wait to see where you take things from here (that is, assuming the "splat" at the end of the chapter wasn't Nick getting flattened). He might be spending the night under there! I have to say I really enjoyed the imagery of Nick being super tiny and trapped in a puddle of cum while Cassie's butt looms above him. It'll be interesting to see how she reacts to how small he is now(if she thinks it was on purpose) and if he winds up even smaller.
I personally really enjoy Cassie's character. Like I said in another review she reminds me a lot of my wife IRL who I could see being a lot like Cassie if I figured out how to do something like this, lol.
Author's Response:
And the butt action doesn’t stop there; there’s LOTS more to come!
There’s just something about a tiny person swimming in a pool of cum while a giant woman squirts more down on him that I like. The feeling of helplessness from the tiny person’s perspective while watching a giant pussy discharge on top of him, all the while the woman has no idea what she’s doing to him.
As far as how Cassie will react... well, She has to find him first.
I’m glad you’re liking the story; thank you for the review.
Date: September 17 2020 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Little Birthday Present
Another very sexy chapter
Great work on the interaction and smutty scenes
I find myself disliking Cassie over the past few chapters, I don't know if this is your intention or just my views on her character
Author's Response:
Alright, give me some details: what exactly don’t you like about Cassie? Is it her personality, her features, or how she deals with Nick?
Date: September 11 2020 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 6: A Little Birthday Fun
Another great chapter! I really can't wait to see where you take this, especially as Nick continues to lose control. Cassie keeps saying she doesn't want a 2-inch tall husband, but I have a feeling she may just wind up with one!
I really enjoyed the panty entrapment and I like the idea of Nick struggling to get free only for Cassie to mistake his movements for him enjoying himself. Hoping for some booty action too. Also, I know Cassie more off a gentle giantess but it would be interesting to see her punish Nick while he's shrunken like if he accidentally shrinks and she thinks he did it on purpose without telling her or something like that.
Great story!
Author's Response:
Oh, trust me, Nick’s troubles are FAR from over!
I’ve always thought in might be fun to be stuck inside a woman’s panties while she’s wearing them. You’ll probably see it in more of my stories moving forward.
If you want booty stuff, just wait until the next chapter, when Nick gets his next “present”.
[Report This]Date: September 11 2020 1:36 AM Title: Forward
Thanks for considering the bath tub scene, and I look forward to more footplay (hopefully aware sole wrinkle interaction at really tiny sizes)! Also can't wait to read the babysitter trouble giantess Shannon chapter. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
So, I thought in depth about the bath tub scene, but I don’t think it really fits in this story as it’s going. HOWEVER, you have inspired me to add it to one of my other upcoming stories, and I think it fits WAY better there, so thanks for the suggestion!
I can tell you that I have been giving the Shannon chapter some more thought. I haven’t finished the outline yet, but once I do, and have a good idea about where I’m taking that chapter, I will get it written.
Date: September 10 2020 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 6: A Little Birthday Fun
Great chapter! Hoping there's another footplsy chapter...maybe one where he's small enough that the wrinkles on her sole look like canyons! I'd also love a chapter in the bath where he rides in a tiny toy boat and explores while she plays with her tiny bath toy!
Author's Response:
Well, without giving too much away, I can guarantee there will be more foot action, though not as in depth or immense as in chapter 4 (which I hope you read and enjoyed).
The bath idea is interesting, but I’ll have to give it some thought.
Thank you for your review; I’m glad you’re reading my current work. I’m also glad you added it to you favorites.
Thanks again.
Date: September 01 2020 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 4: A Little Foot Play
This chapter was just plain HOT and SEXY!!!
But also, they are both just so sweet and innocent with each other, it’s so wholesome and adorable! I’m in love with them!
Seriously, I can’t wait for what happens next!
I kind of don’t want this story to EVER end!
Author's Response:
. This was another chapter based on personal experience; I loved it so much that I just had to add a chapter about it. I’m glad you liked it.
Date: September 01 2020 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 3: A Little Bar of Soap
The honest, domestic interaction between Nick and Cassie in this chapter is SO sweet. It’s so cute how Cassie just can’t stay mad at Nick when he’s tiny, and it’s sexy how she treats him in the bath and shower!
(Honestly though, I don’t know why he wouldn’t wanna go in his wife’s asscrack, lol!)
The part where Cassie just looks at Nick rubbing cream into her feet with pure adoration while thinking about how much she loves him was too much for my heart to handle!
I love the focus on foot play in this story, and it’s so descriptively written!
Very hot and steamy chapter!
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Well, like I mentioned before, I wanted the characters to seem more realistic; this scene is loosely based on personal experience, and how it might be fun to be used as a bar of soap cleaning someone’s feet and entire body. I know there was a lot of focus on foot play in this and some of the upcoming chapters, which isn’t everyone’s cup of tea, but there will be a little something for everyone by the time the story ends.
Date: September 01 2020 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 2: A Little Lazy Day Weekend
And now we’ve come full circle to chapter 1!
I love that Cassie and Nick are both able to enjoy normal-sized fun with each other, and you write it really well!
Cassie once again shows herself to be a MASTER of teasing!
Finally, I really liked how you were able to create a sense of danger without the couple’s interaction resulting in injury or death.
(And I almost wish those final moments had been a little more drawn out! I ADORE when I giantess bathes her little man!)
Author's Response:
I’m glad could include some normal-sized interactions in this story. I’ve always thought about dabbling at writing a romance novel, but wasn’t sure I could get the scenarios and character temperaments right, so thanks for the feedback.
This chapter was meant to be a learning experience for both characters, but mostly Nick. I wanted him to realize just how dangerous being small can be, and for you to get a glimpse of Cassie’s nature of forgetting herself around him.
I thought about extending the sink/bathing scene, but the chapter was already running kinda long.
Date: September 01 2020 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Little Beginning
I love how you write foot interactions! Cassie really knows how to manhandle her little man! She is also perfect in how teasing and playful she can be!
And I love plus-sized girls, so that’s a great bonus when reading this story!
Author's Response:
I’m also fond of Cassie’s teasing nature; it’s what makes her so sexy and seductive.
As far as her appearance, although I described her as “plus-sized”, she’s not morbidly obese or anything like that. Basically, she’s the type of girl that doesn’t recognize her own beauty.
Date: September 01 2020 4:57 AM Title: Forward
This story is AMAZING
Right off the bat, you totally get the feeling that Cassie and Nick are a sweet, loving, passionate young married couple whose interactions are the perfect balance of fluff and smut.
I love your descriptions of Cassie’s body, and I love how on board she is to play along with Nick’s fantasies. I love how she takes time to hold him in her hands and kiss him all over his body before letting him pleasure her.
Author's Response:
Well, welcome to the story. You certainly have been busy writing reviews, so I’ll respond to each of them separately:
First, although I know that some people love the domineering, evil giantess interactions in their stories (me included), I wanted to write in some gentle giantess interactions where the giantess is loving and playful, though she may not know her own strength, which is what this story is partly built around. I think it makes the characters and the events seem more realistic. Cassie would never do anything to intentionally hurt Nick, but if she doesn’t know she’s being too playful... I don’t know, I just find that really sexy.
[Report This]Date: August 14 2020 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 2: A Little Lazy Day Weekend
I really enjoyed this chapter. I like the personality you've created for Cassie. She makes me think of what my wife would probably be like in a situation like this...gentle but prone to getting carried away and careless if she's in the right mood and turned on enough. Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Author's Response:
Well, I wanted to Cassie to have a sweet, yet playful nature, while still remaining realistic; in actuality, she’s based on two real people. I know sometimes people like the playful giantess type, but I also wanted to detail what can happen when they accidentally become a little too playful—So, sort of a mix between the aware and unaware scenarios.
Thanks for the review! Keep checking back for more updates.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2020 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: A Little Beginning
Great story:) I cant wait to see what coming next.
Author's Response:
Whelp, check back next week to find out!