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Reviewer: FriedNova324 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2022 4:37 AM Title: Housewife

Damn that was very hot, it seems you read my mind since I always had the fantasy of a universe where technology is capable of stealing other parallel universes and shrinking them

I personally don't like boys' stories (cap 1 and 3) but I loved, I really loved, the housewife chapter. my suggestions for the future are two

1- Brief descriptions of the people who live on the shrunken planets, how they see the pregnant woman, how the countries go crazy, etc.

2- an enumeration of the universes based on the largest star that exists there, for example universe vy cannis 2 or universe uy scuti 3 (that's the method I use xD)

Reviewer: Leylagts Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2020 7:52 PM Title: College Boy Steven

it would be cool if you did a futa giantess chapter

 

Reviewer: Leylagts Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2020 1:25 AM Title: College Boy Steven

i loved the single chapter I found it amuseing that the world is now stuck with him instead of a hot girl/guy and everyone has no choice but to suck it up and deal with it

Reviewer: Ess-rets Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2020 6:12 AM Title: College Boy Steven

I really appreciate the housewife chapter, but I do think that the man chapter was also very good. To be honest, you are one of my favorite author there, please continue with the same inspiration and imagination ! 

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2020 3:41 AM Title: College Boy Steven

The housewife chapter was great. Would love to see more of this kind of uncaring use, maybe by someone younger. Could they be forced to spend a few hundred years demolishing a forest of public hair? Could they be left trapped and forgotten in a shoe in the back of a closet? Could they be rendered undying, compressed into the grime on some shoe soles for what feels like a millennium, but only encompasses a soccer game or a jog?

Could the entire world be made so small it fits squarely on a girls asshole, laid across the ridges and valleys, and commanded to clean after a long day? Perhaps their user could swipe too far on their control panel, and instead of trapping them there for a few hundred years of their time, it ends up as a million, all before they've even been brainwashed so they have no purpose but to live off their landscape.

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2020 1:59 AM Title: College Boy Steven

I agree, the housewife chapter was really well done. I love all your stories but this one touches on a bunch of really great elements. A typical housewife becoming a cosmic goddess and being able to effortlessly affect the history of an entire, real earth along with the very souls of its inhabitants? Yep, that's certainly a nice premise. You're one of the few authors I'm always eager for more from.

Reviewer: Jack Demon Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2020 10:08 PM Title: College Boy Steven

Loved the pregnant housewife chapter, shame there was no mouthplay or anything more directly sexual

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