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Reviewer: sanesam Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this, I would love to be your next tiny victim.

Reviewer: mrchunks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

The Donald Trump and Brad pitt Analogy got quite a laugh out of me, Another Great story Girlfood



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it Mrchunks. Thanks for the review and the rating!

Reviewer: amanda Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2009 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ooooh i love this story you really are very good at depicting how a woman feels about this erotic subject,i imagine being her when i read this.She acts similar to the way i feel all the time,i  look forward to reading your next story Girlfood x.

Amanda.   



Author's Response: Thank you so much Amanda! I look forward to your next work as well.

Reviewer: eatme please Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2008 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

What a great story this really pushed all of my buttons,i look forward to reading more of your work.

Author's Response: thank you kindly.

Reviewer: Scrumptious Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2008 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have to say that this is one of the best stories I have read in this genre (and it is my fav. genre!)

I like the orientation in the predator, and the hunger you express for her. It's also a very good length.

The only hitch, I suppose, is that George goes down because of an involuntary reflex, rather than the act of desire on her part. Sure, she was likely to do it anyway, but I much prefer the vore where the swallower is in full control and is fully knowledgeable about what she is doing.

Author's Response:  i appreciate you constructive criticism with the reflex. She was indeed planning to swallow the man, the reflex just sped things up. thank you for the review and the rating:)

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2008 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

A very good yarn, GF, especially with the angle of Lindsay narrating. I also admired the subtleness of her sexual excitement as her friend/victim slowly expires in her belly/stomach.   I really enjoyed it!   Thank you!

Author's Response: Thanks. I thought it would be hard to put myself in the "predator" frame of mind so I went with her slowly discovering and even fighting her impulses until the last moment. It was easier to write than I expected. Thanks for the review bud. 

Reviewer: Lady Prey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2008 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good story, Girlfood. There's something really appealing in the idea of the predator being a trusted friend of the unsuspecting prey until the moment of thruth.

Author's Response: I agree completely. As long as it's not a family member I am into the unsuspecting person being eaten by a trusted friend.

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