Reviewer: Sheograth Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2020 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 6

I'm really enjoying the pace in this story!

You're taking your time and allowing your characters to shine through, while also giving time to focus on each size milestone Andrew reaches. I'm personally looking forward to how things go once he gets to the size he was in the prologue, especially since there's a lot of unaware potential.

But you could take a dozen more chapters before you made it back to that size point and it'd still be an enjoyable read. Justine and Maddie clearly have different takes on exactly how to interact with Andrew, beyond how to care for him, so it'd be fun to see you continuing to explore that.

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad to hear you enjoy the way the story is told. Interaction is important to me, both in this fantasy and my stories, so there definitely will be more of it. Stick around, more chapters to come. : )