[Report This]Date: January 11 2022 8:19 PM Title: Prologue
Slow inexorable shrinking & mischievous women are the best combination.
Date: April 26 2020 4:49 PM Title: Prologue
A good story, burdened somewhat by difficult to believe actions of all characters (reactions to shrinking). I highly appreciated your attention to detail, both environmental and concerning girls' personalities.
I hope to see you soon with another project.
All the best,
C
Author's Response:
Thank you for an honest opinion, I actually appreciate it. I'm also happy to hear you're looking forward to seeing more of my writings.
[Report This]Date: April 23 2020 2:41 PM Title: Prologue
Great story, It's actually sad he's too small now to interact with Justine and Maddie ever again. But the ending does remind me of the Incredible Shrinking Man if that's what you were going for.
Author's Response:
Thank you, for both the review and the high score. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. And, yeah, that's exactly what I was aiming for. ; )
Date: April 13 2020 7:11 AM Title: Prologue
Really enjoying this one, even more than Miscalculation. Look forward to the continuation and hope to see more Justine!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I like your stories as well, I particularly enjoyed 'When in Rome'. I didn't have time to continue the story lately, but I think I'm getting back on track, so expect the new chapters soon!
[Report This]Date: April 02 2020 11:25 PM Title: Prologue
Great story. I really love the interaction between the characters, especially how cavalier the girls are about picking him up at their whim. We don't get enough handheld action in many of the stories but this one really is scratching my itch. I hope you continue!
Author's Response:
Thank you and sorry for a late reply. I'm glad to hear you find the handheld bits in my story to be enjoyable. A new chapter had been posted today, more to come. : )