Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2009 12:33 PM Title: Relief

Uh-oh! Methinks Byron is soon going to be facing a whole different form of music.

P.S.---thanks for the nice update.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2008 11:30 AM Title: Exhibition

I have a feeling that Melissa is going to force Sayuko to be a rival "fighting shrinkie" owner (a la rooster fights). And, she'll probably have to comply out of fear for Taro's life.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2008 11:16 PM Title: Trivia

Melissa is definitely not as smart as she thinks she is. Sayuko is obviously a Japanese name. So, technically, the correct disparaging term would have been (and I profusely apologize for this, in advance, btw) "J*p." Or, even more archaically, "n*p!"

The latter was the racist term used by American civilians and servicemen, alike, for both Nisei and Japanese nationals during WWII. Indeed, the word was quite often used by the cast of the b/w 1960's sitcom "McHale's Navy!" Which would explain why one seldom sees reruns of that show, anymore.

Author's Response: Yeah, you're right. Sayuko IS Japanese. And the c-word was the first word that came to my mind when I was writing that part. I had a lot to work on here. @.@

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2008 8:20 AM Title: Lust

I think Bruce is being way too modest. He's a WAY bigger Bush-itter than the President!

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2008 7:01 PM Title: Origins of a Mad Mistress

OK story. Some good parts and some not so good.
Keep going. It sounds like it could get better...

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Yeah. I know that this story isn't perfect. As my first GTS story, I know that there's going to be mistakes. But one of my main purposes of writing this story is to improve my skills as a writer.

Reviewer: Stylesrj Signed [Report This]
Date: July 17 2008 6:17 AM Title: Lucky Day

Whatever it is, in order to escape, you need a cunning plan. A plan so cunning, you can put a tail on it and call it a weasel.

The best way to win at Pokemon actually is to shoot the trainer. I mean, why bother gagging the trainer when you can purchase a gun and if someone asks to duel you in battle, you shoot them and run. And if that Officer Jenny comes along, well all they've got are Growliths. You've got a gun. Guns win.

Before i go too much off topic, nice work as usual. Keep going. I want to see how it turns out (hopefully without everyone dying. Commonplace to read a story where everyone dies. I don't like reading typical stories of defeat)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2008 9:07 PM Title: Discovery

I've always regarded Pokemon as bad. Or, rather, the subgenre of anime that gives all anime a bad name. I mean; let's face it. All you really have to do to defeat a Pokemon is gag its owner's mouth so they can't yell out what superpowers to invoke!

As occasionally happens to Zatanna and Billy Batson over at DC Comics.

The rest of the chapter, though? Awesome! :-)

Author's Response: lol yeah. I don't really watch the anime anymore. But I love the main RPG games. Some of my favorite games ever.

Reviewer: dietz Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2008 12:29 AM Title: Freedom

Again, I can't say this enough times, (although some people will say I can :P)  Another great chapter, and you have this person waiting eagerly for more ^^

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2008 1:59 PM Title: The Death Clock

I've probably said this before about her. But, Melissa clearly has more issues than a subway newstand!

Reviewer: dietz Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2008 1:33 AM Title: Lucky Day

You really have me hooked on this story, I eagerly await the next chapter ^^