Reviewer: dietz Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2008 11:56 PM Title: Tactics of Escape

The most dramatic chapter of the story yet!  The careful planning of the escape, the sacrifice, and now that Thomas is outside, a whole new world of possibilities opens up.  The concern with the water spilling rises a concern though, as if Melissa spiked it with something......anyway....ADD ON PLEASE!