Reviews For Bugman Games
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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 17 2008 7:01 PM Title: Origins of a Mad Mistress

OK story. Some good parts and some not so good.
Keep going. It sounds like it could get better...

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Yeah. I know that this story isn't perfect. As my first GTS story, I know that there's going to be mistakes. But one of my main purposes of writing this story is to improve my skills as a writer.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2008 8:15 AM Title: Origins of a Mad Mistress

Re: the flashack? I think you succeeded, admirably. An absolutely brilliant origin!

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