[Report This]Date: July 02 2013 6:57 PM Title: Lucky Day
Hey Solar Crimson I just wanted to stop by and pay my respects to one of the best stories I have read on this site.
This story is absolutely perfect in every way. You have created a truly epic work here my friend.
10/10. 100%. A++.
Go out and buy you favorite drink and put it on my tab because you sir have earned it.
Date: September 21 2009 8:41 PM Title: Lucky Day
Melissa should have died or been put in jail...but that is just my preferance, otherwise nice :)
Date: May 13 2009 8:21 PM Title: Lucky Day
Well I guess this is the last review I can leave for this story and I must say, once again, that this has been a great read from beginning to end. Submit it to an editor, I think it's that good :P I enjoyed reading it and I hope you enjoyed writing it. ~Dietz
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and to be honest, I do plan to use these characters in something if I were to pursue fiction as a career. Hmm... If I published this story, perhaps I could mainstream GTS? ;) Nah... I'm getting ahead of myself. But thanks for your kind words. :)
[Report This]Date: March 06 2009 10:58 AM Title: Lucky Day
Ah the long awaited 31st chapter, it was REALLY good to see the war go out and that punishment at the end was ridiculous XD
Keep up the good work as always
Date: July 17 2008 6:17 AM Title: Lucky Day
Whatever it is, in order to escape, you need a cunning plan. A plan so cunning, you can put a tail on it and call it a weasel.
The best way to win at Pokemon actually is to shoot the trainer. I mean, why bother gagging the trainer when you can purchase a gun and if someone asks to duel you in battle, you shoot them and run. And if that Officer Jenny comes along, well all they've got are Growliths. You've got a gun. Guns win.
Before i go too much off topic, nice work as usual. Keep going. I want to see how it turns out (hopefully without everyone dying. Commonplace to read a story where everyone dies. I don't like reading typical stories of defeat)
[Report This]Date: March 24 2008 1:33 AM Title: Lucky Day
You really have me hooked on this story, I eagerly await the next chapter ^^
[Report This]Date: March 03 2008 12:56 AM Title: Lucky Day
You could try and appease everyone here by dabbling into other categories, but you should try and stick with what you like and enjoy and keep it throughout the story.
So if you're a foot person, keep a main focus or a complete focus on feet. You can alienate everyone by trying to keep a mix of themes (and seriously, when I see a Foot and Insertion story, the author always seems to focus too much on the feet part)
Oh and as for the story, good job with it, but you could lay off the copyright stuff. It's not like Nintendo or Sony has the time to send in men in black baclavas to arrest you for not copyrighting their brand name.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2008 9:38 AM Title: Lucky Day
Heh! Looks like Melissa is the one who will be doing the "picking up."