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Reviewer: Shaman Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2020 3:18 PM Title: Introspection

I'm a little late but glad I'm reading through it now anyways. Props on your vocabulary and your writing style, I find everything very enjoyable to read!

also good job on finding 10 titles starting with an 'i' 



Author's Response:

Thanks, and I'm glad you liked reading it!

Most of my longer stories have a pattern with the chapter titles and you're the first one who's ever noticed lmao

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2020 8:11 AM Title: Introspection

Poor guy, trapped in the jar. I'm still not sure for who this competition is healthy exactly. At least he's back with Meredith.

How do they plan on beating Tanisha? She will only become stronger with this shrinking skill. Wouldn't it be easier to beat her now vs later.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and as always

Thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

The jar was the least bad option, if you think about where else she could have put him for safety.

Sometimes, the goal isn't to win but just to outlast.  Maybe they can't beat her, but if they can make it to the end they'll have won their own victory.

And thank you for reviewing!

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