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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2020 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

Nice story. Lots of luck with surviving the stomach, but is it bad that I hope you have an alternate ending chapter where Wakaba either still has to  pass through the entire body and out the back door, or becomes a part of Hinata's body(you decide if sentient, and if they find out.



Author's Response:

Thought about possibly doing an alternate bad end like the latter, where they'd digested and assimilated as body fat in Hinata's breasts. Ended up not feeling long enough with some of the hopelessness setting in at an earlier point so not as much to cover which already wasn't. Maybe I'll do something like that down the road or if there's demand. It'd probably be several times shorter than these two chapters though.

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