[Report This]Date: April 12 2020 4:07 AM Title: The Love
Great story! Loved both chapters so far.
I would love to see a chapter where a guy lets his girlfriend shrink him down to be her "sex toy", thinking his girlfriend must mean she wants to use him as a dildo. But once he shrinks, he is a little smaller than he expected to be (maybe like 3-4 inches instead of 6-7) and asks how he is supposed to be a dildo at this size. That's when he finds out she wasn't looking for a dildo, she was looking for a butt plug. And then maybe a description of what it's like in her butt as she takes care of herself up front, hips bucking meaning he was getting bounced around a bit. Maybe she leaves his head outside of her body, meaning it is getting battered by her cheeks and squeezed by her asshole.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the story so far
And you have a really great suggestion, although I don't think I'm going to do much of it
I mostly write with my own inspiration and ideas, sooooo... yeah
Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: March 21 2020 10:03 AM Title: The Love
This was a very fun story. Well done!
Author's Response:
Oh, Master noticed my work!
Thank you so much for you review, I'm glad you like it! :D
Date: March 18 2020 2:56 PM Title: The Love
Very sexy
Author's Response:
Sexy? you really think so? ^^
[Report This]Date: March 18 2020 1:19 PM Title: The Love
Short, sweet, and very evocative. You do a really great job at allowing the reader to visualize the action. Great story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I really wanted to do a kind of lewd and emotional story ^^