Date: March 10 2020 3:01 PM Title: The City in Her Stomach
This is a fascinating story with a pretty unique concept. You don't see cities inside of giantess' very often. The intriguing mystery of what seems to be a dimensional network inside Maya's stomach and what the overall explanation for it is is a pretty good driving story element. I really like the buddy cop kind of dynamic that seems to be building between Blake and Trinity. I also don't know if it was intentional or not but the fact that Blake seems like a dick is really good characterization. Would be interested to see where this goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm really glad you thought this story was so unique. It's a really unexplored concept that I thought about alot the past few weeks. As for Blake and him being a dick, that was unintentional but I'm glad you liked it. But at this point, I'm not really sure where to go right now in the story but I do have some ideas but those might come later down the line.