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Reviewer: adamantgts Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 29 2020 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was an excellent read, the premise is creative, and although it’s short it packs a lot. I love the particular brand of cruelty of Amber, I would love to read additional stories on this world, from expansions of some of the anecdotes quickly described in this one to what happens next, and if she eventually shrinks more people. Great work, thank you for sharing! And I hope you decide to revisit this characters in the future.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2020 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic Journey.  Oops, I mean Fantastic Story.

Please keep it going.

Reviewer: Ubersalamander Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2020 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

No A Friendly Wager? REEEEE!
But seriously, keep up the good work.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2020 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love this idea. What a cruel idea with great visions from u

Reviewer: fanta333 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2020 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story!

Unrelated question though... any chance for more of your "Is This Just Fantasy?" story?

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