Date: April 19 2020 2:03 PM Title: Arrival
Really fun story! Hope to see the next chapter soon!
Date: March 03 2020 4:36 PM Title: Arrival
I am in love with this story and am patiently awaiting details. That toilet scene had me on the edge of my seat ( pun intended ) thinking he's dead, there's no way out of this. How the FUCK, Then ashlynn got him and it was sooo good. You have amazing writing please please get another chapter out soon I can't wait to see where this goes!
Date: March 01 2020 4:52 PM Title: Arrival
Will there be F/fm, will Mrs. Brooks appear?
Author's Response:
She will appear again, but I'm not sure how yet. Kinda making this up as I go.
Date: March 01 2020 12:57 AM Title: Arrival
Nice story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: February 29 2020 8:28 PM Title: Arrival
Amazing start can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: February 29 2020 3:26 PM Title: Arrival
Really good stuff. The flattening aspect has some interesting ramifications. I'd would be fun to see him be truly forgotten and mixed in with toe jam, or having slipped down from th e lower back end up ground right into the creases of one of their buttholes.
Maybe later on the girls could borrow the device and shrink him even smaller so he doesn't get in the way of their fun. Maybe his trip out of the park could be between the fibres of one of those well worn socks.
Author's Response:
So many possibilities! I'll see where it takes me. There will definitely be some butt stuff.
[Report This]Date: February 21 2020 5:16 PM Title: Arrival
Great start! Love it so far, though I'm very excited to see the Butt tag come into play. Having him in a butt during a roller coaster might be interesting. I also want to see Ashlynn get to play with him. Maybe Maddie enjoying him between her toes will make Ashlynn jealous enought to want a turn
Author's Response:
There will definitely be butt stuff ahead!
Date: February 20 2020 10:22 PM Title: Arrival
Looking good!
Author's Response:
THanks!
[Report This]Date: February 20 2020 7:57 PM Title: Arrival
I enjoyed your other stories, and based on what I've seen so far I'll definitely enjoy this one too. It has a fun premise and interesting characters, and your writing style is perfect for it. I would be lying if I said I didn't want to see Mrs. Brooks and her friends take him though...
Author's Response:
Thanks! I might work back around to that.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2020 11:18 AM Title: Arrival
Will this have some gentle or romance?
I hope so...I feel bad for poor zach and I hope stays nice. And she secretly likes him.
Interesting idea man keep it up
Author's Response:
I wasn't planning on it, but only because I can't really write romance. But I'll see where it leads.
Date: February 20 2020 1:10 AM Title: Arrival
Its a great start to the story so far. Looking forward to more details about his experience, especially down at Maddie's feet. Would love to see the nonchalance continue, maybe even some borderline unaware parts where they forget or disregard him. Love all the sensory details.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I plan to do all of this, although it usually takes me a long time to update or finish stories.