Date: June 01 2022 8:52 PM Title: All the Better to Smell You With (part 2)
Great chapter and well worth the wait! I can’t wait to see what other smelly depths they get up to in the next chapter! I just wish you spent a bit more time on the smell, seems like that fell off in favor of plot elements, which was fine, it just seemed a bit short to me. When you mentioned her soaked socks and shoes I was hoping that may become apart of the chapter as well. Great read, hope to read the next chapter soon too! Those were just some of my thoughts!
Author's Response:
Gee, sounds like you really wanted some saucy details! I was kind of getting in gear with the cultists, admittedly, considering how long this chapter was taking for me, I was kind of trying to hurry it along. There is only so many ways you can describe smelly feet. That being said, hopefully, I'll make it up next chapter.
That being said, that would have been a nice addition, with the socks and shoes, and Andrew having to deal with that, but I wanted to streamline some of those things.
Date: June 01 2022 4:14 PM Title: All the Better to Smell You With (part 2)
The wait was long but I was definitely worth it. It’s nice to see that the training Andrew is having is not easy but it seems to be effective, can’t wait to see what Andrew was referring to when he asked cait for her worst
Author's Response:
Andrew wants to deal with Caitlin unfiltered, he doesn't want to diminish his progress with her taking a shower. That being said, I don't think this is spoiling anything, for him, it's only going to get worse.