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Reviewer: Gokuto Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2022 8:35 PM Title: Visions in the Dark

That was pretty good. Option 2 sounds like the most interesting and fun



Author's Response:

I've been getting a lot of feedback in favor of option 2. That being said, people have also clamored for the others, so we'll see what comes out next.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2022 12:46 PM Title: Visions in the Dark

You succesfully managed to both terrify me and melt my heart in the same chapter. Congrats you sick fuck, that was excellent! 

Aside from that, the routes in the chapter end credits are pretty exciting particularly the one about how they met and the high school one. I just really want some more insight on the life of these characters.

You did a great job with this one and I'll look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Ha ha, gotcha!

I do occasionally read, and enjoy, the straight-up nasty stories, GhostWriter44 (don't know if I got the name exact), had some real zingers. I always had to follow-up with a gentle chaser, like Fear and Delight, because I got legitimately depressed after reading those cruel creations. Think of this chapter as my attempt to integrate the cruel to gentle pipeline.

Also, for those of you who skipped to the reviews to see if I pulled kind of twist with all this snuff, I wag my finger at you. I'd also have to wag my finger at myself, since I do the exact same thing.

I'll keep in mind your recommendations for the next chapter.

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