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Reviewer: combine45 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2022 4:21 AM Title: Putting her Foot Down (Part 1)

Very sweet relationship



Author's Response:

Hopefully not sickly sweet. And a bit salty as well.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2022 12:19 AM Title: Putting her Foot Down (Part 1)

I'm really enjoying the dynamic between husband and wife in this story. It's just wholesome! I'm eager to see more of them. The only gripe I have is that there is very little character development. I feel like it would help to explore a little more about them as people after this arc. Maybe talk about how they met or their future plans since it seems a little job centric right now. That's just me though, feel free to do whatever you want, the story is pretty entertaining as is. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I was planning on keeping this rather episodic, and slice-of-life, so people can dive right in and enjoy their preferred chapter. That being said, I have given consideration for some rather loose story arcs. There's been some brainstorming about how both Andrew and Caitlin met, but I was unsure if I would devote the effort to commit that to paper, since there are other things I'd like to write about as well. However, seeing this review, I just might be so inclined to do just that.

Thanks for the review, and glad you enjoyed it.

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