Reviewer: alwaysyearslate Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2020 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day

Since the site doesn't have a comment section I'm just gonna leave my thoughts here. 

First, I did not expect this story to directly address the flaws in the capitalist system and how the wealthy have control over justice. (guillotine Blair? Idk I'd say a hard probably)

Second, fuck Blair. Like actually, fuck that all-knowing, I'm-better-than-you attitude. She saying she wont stand down and wont apologise for actual rape. Nah, she gotta stand the fuck down before she finds out that all humans bleed the same. Can't apologise for shit. But I guess I'm at fault for thinking a stuck up rich girl high off her inheritance could ever feel real empathy. She is soon to be in a shock when she realises that the world is more than rubbing yourself constantly.

Third, Macy literally got herself high off of Blair and now has nothing withput her. You really wonder about why she decided to make everything in her life about Blair.

All this said, this really isn't anything against your story. It's well written and the characters behave exactly like I'd imagine they would in real life. The writing style and the description of emotion are wonderful. I really just wanted to vent about Blair's actions now that the story is taking a turn from the giantess content and into more deep tones about emotions. (Seriously though this is an accurate description on how rich people just get away with anything because they can and I love that people are realizing that) 

Reviewer: Joker592 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2020 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 19: What happened?

If Blair was really sorry she would have destroyed the shrink way since daisy has turned back to normal! I mean that guy she made out with saw tiny daisy meaning Blair already risked the invention falling into the wrong hands! She doesn't know that guy well anyway. For all she knows, he could secretly have a micro fetish! Blair needs to destroy the invention to truelly apologize to daisy so no one will go through what she put daisy through!

Reviewer: jessebona Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2020 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 17: Regret

Actions have consequences, who knew? I'm glad she finally got slapped with the reality of what she was doing given how long she ignored her feelings. Not overly sympathetic towards her though.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2020 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 16: Drunk

And we are nearly upon it, the moment of truth; where we see if, in the aftermath of this little orgy, Blair truly cares for her or not.

Reviewer: Quince_Denver Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2020 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day

Great stuff. Blair's arc is very refreshing as she becomes more sympathetic over time, as opposed to the usual opposite.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2020 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 12: Homework

Blair is struggling with her feelings. Obviously she likes dominating her, likes the fear response. But she's also obviously enamored with her, is starting to feel guilty about hurting her.

I feel like an epiphany moment is coming. She's going to do something that truly causes Pixie lasting harm, and we'll get to see how she really feels.

Reviewer: Ronaldinho10 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2020 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 10: Cake

One of my favorite stories on this site atm keep up the good work!

Btw does Blair know that Daisy is living in an orphanage?

Reviewer: Bletch Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2020 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 9: Hunger

I wonder what would have happened if it was Pixie to shrink the bully, but destiny is always cruel to the weak

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2020 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 8: Search

The plot thickens.

Reviewer: Franchise Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2020 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day

This is a pretty unique story so far. I don't often see a dynamic like this where both parties involved have some level of interest in each other, even if it's subconscious to start with. I think the way you're showing it off its pretty accurate given how both Blair and Pixie are acting. 

I hope you'll do more sweat play. It's pretty rare to see people try to write it, but for me, that was the best part when it came to later chapters. 

I also think that how you started this story off was pretty well thought out. Building up both girls before any shrinking was introduced was a good idea, and it highlights their emotions afterward. 

Hopefully, you'll update it again soon. Not a lot of stories on here have been keeping my interest like yours lately.