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Reviewer: revival45 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 25 2022 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

This has been a really solid story so far!  I know it's a bit older, but I'd love to see you continue this story with these characters (at least the ones that are left).  The way you pair the mental breakdown of the trio to the lowest, unaware torture of the mom is really well done.  I'd love to see how it ends!

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 18 2021 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 3

always loved this story with the ass parasite aspect would love to see this being continued by time!

Reviewer: Idealworld Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2021 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 3

I love this one too; the group's slow despair at the hands, or should I say the butt of Mark's mom. You wrote some pretty good characters, and I love the dynamic between them. As always, you write unaware spectacularly. I hope you continue this one someday too. 

Reviewer: arselover Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2020 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

really hope youre still around and continue this amazing story by time

Reviewer: arselover Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2020 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 3

really hope for an update on this

Reviewer: pete445 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2020 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

again this story is just brilliant I hope you continue it in the future and also write more stories like this one

Reviewer: redcars Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2020 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

pleasss continue

Reviewer: pete445 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2020 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 3

please update by time this was so good story

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2020 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 3

Update soon? This story was so amazing so far

Reviewer: arselover Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22 2020 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 3

any update, please^^

Reviewer: clubby88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 30 2020 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

so hot... update? amazing story

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2020 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

hope you continue soon awesome story

Reviewer: redcars Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2020 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

cant wai for an update honestly

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2020 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 3

totally looking forward for next to come

Reviewer: ILike Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02 2020 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 3

cant wait when it continues

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2020 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 3

love where this is going, would be actually kinda ironic if tyler becomes a pinworm himself for some random girl using the toilet again and him lost forever no one knows where he is. even if the two other become enlarged again they wouldnt know in which girls ass tyler now is.

Reviewer: redcars Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2020 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

really good

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2020 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved the part of the girl saying how it was a silent one not smelling and how it was hell for the microscopics. would like to see Tyler not be flushed away that would be too quick. and hope for lots of cruel scat parts. very good written.

Reviewer: ILike Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24 2020 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

fantastic. just how I love scat and unaware nano plots. please more

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2020 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hot!! I was waiting for this to return. you put so good gross dark details in the plot loving it. The ass parasite part was so ho to think about. Would love to see Tyler maybe become literllyy one of these rectal parasites when a young skinny girl uses the toilet next and one of her turds hitting the water sends him upwards into her anus. Cant wait for more to come.

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