[Report This]Date: April 20 2015 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 7--Face Time
Awesome story. I hope it gets finished.
Date: November 07 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 7--Face Time
Love the story hope you decide to finish it.
Date: February 22 2008 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1--Enter Kelly
Then how about not saying anything at all KazumaR1. Jackass. Anyway, this is a great story dude, action packed with rich descriptions. I love the unaware element of it too. Maybe in your next story you could have some unaware crush (wink wink).
[Report This]Date: February 20 2008 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 7--Face Time
Welp, this is pretty much turning out to be a generic slaughter vest via lolipop and tongue. I really have nothing to say about this...
[Report This]Date: February 13 2008 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 4--Our Story Begins to Reflect Its Title
so far so good!
Date: February 12 2008 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 4--Our Story Begins to Reflect Its Title
Very fun story! I liked it alot! Please continue!
Author's Response:
Wow. That really, really means a lot coming from you. I'm one of your biggest fans, and I feel like my style (or at least my tastes) have been influenced a lot by your writing. "Mary" and "New Land" are definitely two of my top ten favorite stories.
And, if I know what you like--and I think I do because I've read all your stories--you will love the way this one turns out. Should be done within a week.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2008 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 1--Enter Kelly
Interesting start so far, I hope you decide to continue this.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2008 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1--Enter Kelly
Great so far. You're writing style sure sucks you into the story.