[Report This]Date: April 28 2021 1:41 PM Title: Calling a Bluff
I really enjoyed reading this story. It is not mainstream, as it includes two male lovers, and both characters are credible, singular and utterly human. And the story stays away from the seductive path towards bdsm, cruelties and power games. A Nine on a scale from 1 to 10.
Date: February 27 2020 7:27 AM Title: Settling In
I am not into giant men or M/m, but you asked for feedback on the discord server and I decided to read it.
What this chapter does well is with descriptions. You use just the right amount to get the erotic feelings going. You can feel the love between the two characters and the intimacy they share. It's not rushed, it's well paced, and overall a job well done.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much Nostory! I really appreciate that coming from you. Especially since i know you're reading outside of your usual preference. Cheers!
Date: February 06 2020 9:25 PM Title: Calling a Bluff
Can't wait to read the next chapter, really enjoyed reading the first part
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear that. Chapter two is in the works, I'm hoping to get it up here soon! =)
[Report This]Date: January 31 2020 7:04 PM Title: Calling a Bluff
That's a giant chapter. An emotional, visceral attachment is a rare thing here. You've definitely kept your special touch.
Author's Response:
That's so kind of you to say, thank you so much! I'm eager to get chapter two up here so that folks can see how it all ends.
Date: January 28 2020 12:00 AM Title: Calling a Bluff
Yo, this is a really good M/m story! Its smut(as is most stuff here though) but has enough building to where you feel like you're in the characters shoes. It's not just "Jack was big and now he is small." It has some depth. The way they get worried and the doubts are great!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Smut was certainly the target here, but I'm glad you could connect with the characters as well. I hope you enjoy the conclusion as well, thanks for reading! :)