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Reviewer: Iunno Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2020 11:30 PM Title: Learning the Hard Way

This is an amazing story! I love the reluctance and taboo pleasure the father has when dealing with his daughter. And the giantess that influences his decision and manipulates him along the way. You're a really great writer! I hope I get to see more stories with this kind of concept written by you!

Despite this, I do have a question. Paige should now be able to leave her dad's dick whenever he cums right? Due to her newfound malleability,right? She didn't manage to avoid getting put back in this time due to Annie. And we know the dad receives pleasure while she's in his ballsack so what's stopping her from just telling him about what Annie has done next he masturbates alone? Would she come out misshapen and unable to talk so he just puts her back? Or is that the reason for the drug addiction?

Again, I just wanted say this is a really nice story. Thanks for writing it!

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2020 4:10 AM Title: Learning the Hard Way

Thought this was an amazing story. Well written and exciting. Especially the added elasticity and use as a condom and re-insertion (probably permanent if she has her way). Made me imagine her getting pregnant and having a little elasti-baby inside his testicles. Lol

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