Reviews For One-Shot City
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Reviewer: zaneofbane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2024 8:54 AM Title: Going Out to Eat

If you're having writer's block, I suggest an "Appreciation Piece" for another artist who's work you enjoy. I've done a few myself. It breaks me out of a rut by making me try something new.

Reviewer: Justhereforamoment1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2023 6:55 PM Title: What They're For

I'd love if there was an all girls version of this! Maybe Todd's sister?

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2023 10:14 PM Title: What They're For

Love seeing the other friend step in and do what needs to be done!

Reviewer: Yougts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2023 6:26 PM Title: The Photo Shoot

So glad you're writing again! Great story! 

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2023 8:45 AM Title: What They're For

Wow, that was a fantastic chapter. Love the callous cruelty and wanton desire of Tina and the gradual breakdown of Evi’s resistance. One very minor nitpick - didn’t care for the broken limb when swallowing, but that’s just me. It’s the difference between a 10 and 10+ rating. One of your best stories and well paced.

Reviewer: hava Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2023 5:40 AM Title: What They're For

fantastic story!

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2023 3:11 AM Title: Afterparty

Always enjoyable!

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2023 9:26 PM Title: House Party

Another great chapter. Loved the unaware prey angle. Why would anyone who writes as well as you retire? 😉

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2022 9:40 PM Title: Just a Random Shrinky

Very hot; I think it would have been better if Anna had swallowed Elliot instead of his mom, who asked again about the tiny, only to be told by her "oh, just some random shrinky". (saving this great line for the end of the story instead of 3/4 of the way through.

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2022 12:03 AM Title: Sarah Unleashed

Gotta love a magic/intelligent item story that pushes someone to greater and greater acts of depravity!

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2022 4:40 PM Title: Friday the Fourteenth

Haha! There will need to be a sequel set in space! Loved it!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2022 10:01 AM Title: Friday the Fourteenth

This was a great chapter, nice twist on the classic slasher tropes and including a size element. 

It was fun seeing the 'final girls' really enjoy having him at such a tiny size.

And I loved the final cliff hanger. (setting it up for a potential sequel? or just a reference to how Jason Vorhees always came back again and again) 

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2022 3:52 PM Title: Moving On

To the point and efficacious!

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Date: June 09 2022 8:28 PM Title: Room For Rent

At the very least, they'll be able to fill the empty roommate position easily enough!

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2022 6:58 PM Title: Fast Times at Metro 'Za

Loved it! Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2022 11:47 PM Title: Tongue Ring

Oh my god, I know these are meant to be one shots, but I sooo want a full story based on this now! I really hope Ella catches Carly and puts her back into a new, unbroken ring and Ella has to truly live the rest of her life in her tongue rings. Here’s to hoping!

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2022 9:37 AM Title: Seeing the Doctor

Very happy to see a new addition to the One Shots, great as always.

Reviewer: zaneofbane Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2022 7:33 AM Title: Seeing the Doctor

Welcome back :D

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2021 5:08 PM Title: Just a Random Shrinky

Holy fuck that's fucked.

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2021 1:44 AM Title: Last Single Night

Great addition to your one shot stories.  I especially like how the shrinking and growing process can be adjusted by just thinking about it.  Also, how easily it could turn out worse than expected for so eone in the shrunk position.  Can't wait to see what you have planned next.

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