Date: January 05 2020 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'd be with either of these ladies. Plot twist, Mandy finally gets him but she leaves him that size and decides to shrink everyone in the world but a select few.
Awesome,
Diesel
Date: January 05 2020 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like Kristine calling him little one. I like the ride on her fingernail. Nicole seems great.
Excellent,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad to hear you liked them both. : )
Date: January 05 2020 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
Looking at her Giantess face is like looking at a god. She is all powerful to him. Loved the matchbox. It's perfect to keep him in or to transport him in.
Later,
Diesel
Date: January 05 2020 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
Kristine sounds wonderful. I'd love to be small in her world. He obviously had a plan and it worked. I thought for sure that she would set him outside. Now what does she keep him in?
Later,
Diesel
Date: January 05 2020 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love how massive she is to him. Her pounding feet that would feel like an earthquake and be even more deadly.
A fun read,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Yes, especially so if he found himself underneath them.
Thank you!
Date: January 04 2020 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like that Mandy in all Her enormousness left him far behind. Now there's a new Giantess. Exciting stuff.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes, there's a new giantess coming soon, and then one more. Without spoiling much, there will be three giant ladies in this story. : )
Date: January 04 2020 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
First off I love the idea of the machine shrinking with him. I would have preferred a more drawn out version of Mandy crushing his machine. Maybe she stops next to it. He screams nooooo, Mandy. Look down. Don't move your foot. Her sandal rises slightly as Mandy shifts her shoe. It hovers over his size machine for a second before lowering and crushing his only chance at returning to normal size. Just my thoughts.
I am enjoying your rendition a lot.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Hello, Diesel. I like your desription. I wanted that moment to be instantenous, to show how meaningless his invention was in contact with her foot. She didn't even notice or hear that something crunched down there, mind. But the way you're describing what happened sounds quite fun, so thank you.
And of course thank you for reading and the kind words. Happy to hear you're enjoying the story so far. As always, stay tuned, more to come. : )