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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2020 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 10

Being in the cage has certain advantages besides being safe. You have the warmth of being close to Kristine's body. The beautiful smell of her body. The relaxation of the rise and fall of her breathing. Count me in.

Author's Response:

Yeah I wouldn't mind trading places with him myself. : )

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2020 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter. Kristine saying that he'd be eaten by a crab. Fabulous. Something would probably get him.
Loved the Giantess women discussing his being in the cage and Kristine saying that it's for his own good. She's totally in control. What a cool Aunt.
The journey from Nicole's foot to her thigh was great. Loved the journey . Shouldn't Nicole use the underside of her fingernail to carry him? The cupped side would be safer. Just a thought.
Great chapter,
Diesel
Will Kristine use tweezers to hold him and study him and his squirming?

Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear you liked the journey bit, it was about time this story had some body exploration. And yeah, I guess this would've been safer, but I just loved the idea of a tiny man spread against a massive fingernail, so I went with that.

Oh, I like the tweezers idea. I'd add that to the story, but I don't know how to fit it in, especially with Kristine. Maybe I'll come back to that idea.

Thanks for reading!

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