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Reviewer: LittleRomance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2020 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was an awesome story!  The gentle and playful interaction was so cute!

Looking forward to the next story!

P.s. how can we get in contact? I have a couple story ideas but I'm a horrible writer. I was wondering if you could write them for me? Like a collab? If it's a no that's ok. 

Great story as always 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. : ) I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.

If you have a deviantart account, look for me there: https://www.deviantart.com/ibalore You can drop me a PM. I can't promise anything at the moment, but I can at least look through your ideas.

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2020 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

So I finally got around reading your story. I'm only on chapter 7, but this is an extremely well written story. I wish I had started it earlier! But on the bright side, I still have a lot more story to look forward to.

The unaware scenes with Mandy were great and felt beleivable. But I especially loved when Kristine discovered Sean; that felt EXTREMELY realistic and truly what a giant would do upon discovering a tiny person. Even when offering him tea, 99% of writers (myself included) would have had the giantess drop him in the cup, but the way you did with her offering some from the tip of her finger was so refreshing and fun to read.

I'm just starting chapter 8 but I am totally looking forward to the rest! I love Nicole so far too. She doesn't come off as gentle and caring as Kristine, so it will be super interesting to read her.

Keep it up man! I'll eventually catch up!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the long review and the stars, much appreciated. I'm repeating myself, but I appreciate people enjoying my stories, so the feeling is here as well. And I have to thank you for appreciating my ideas, like the one with the tea you're mentioning here.

True, you've got some catching up to do, and I hope you will enjoy the ride. : )

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2020 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Which previous story has a Giantess savings a tiny from an insect?
Curious,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Cat's Wail, check it on my profile. It's also a gentle and micro kind of story. 

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2020 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love unaware. It all sounds good especially more chapters.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2020 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love unaware. It all sounds good especially more chapters.

Author's Response:

Stay tuned. :) 

Reviewer: Triz Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2020 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

you have to continue this story. it's freakin amazing!



Author's Response:

Thank you! That is very nice to hear. : ) The story is being continued, stay tuned. ; )

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2020 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

First off I love the idea of the machine shrinking with him. I would have preferred a more drawn out version of Mandy crushing his machine. Maybe she stops next to it. He screams nooooo, Mandy. Look down. Don't move your foot. Her sandal rises slightly as Mandy shifts her shoe. It hovers over his size machine for a second before lowering and crushing his only chance at returning to normal size. Just my thoughts.
I am enjoying your rendition a lot.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Hello, Diesel. I like your desription. I wanted that moment to be instantenous, to show how meaningless his invention was in contact with her foot. She didn't even notice or hear that something crunched down there, mind. But the way you're describing what happened sounds quite fun, so thank you.

And of course thank you for reading and the kind words. Happy to hear you're enjoying the story so far. As always, stay tuned, more to come. : )

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