Date: January 15 2020 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 18 (END)
Great ending. I enjoyed Kristine and her sternness very much. I also enjoyed her finger gently touching him and caressing him. This story was a joy to read from beginning to end. What a treat.
Thank you for reading till the end and for all the encouragment. I'm happy to have written something that you enjoyed for this whole time.
Date: January 15 2020 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was an awesome story! The gentle and playful interaction was so cute!
Looking forward to the next story!
P.s. how can we get in contact? I have a couple story ideas but I'm a horrible writer. I was wondering if you could write them for me? Like a collab? If it's a no that's ok.
Great story as always
Thank you for reading. : ) I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.
If you have a deviantart account, look for me there: https://www.deviantart.com/ibalore You can drop me a PM. I can't promise anything at the moment, but I can at least look through your ideas.
Date: January 14 2020 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
Now that I’ve finally caught up, I can’t believe you actually made me like a gentle story. I’m usually not into that. But the writing and the descriptions were so good that I couldn’t wait to see what happened next. I love Kristine and Nicole as characters. They are so real.
And wow, that last statement by Kristine this chapter gave me chills. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work!
I'm even more happy to hear that you're having fun with a genre that isn't normally in your taste. And I thank you for the kind words regarding my writing style. As for these two characters, it's kind of funny. When I started writing the story I only had a vague idea of them and their roles, but before I knew it I realized they took over as the real protagonists. At least, that's how I see them. : ) And I'm glad they seem convincing; being a man, I have only an approximate knowledge of how to write female characters.
Thank you so much for keeping up with the story. : )
Date: January 13 2020 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
So I finally got around reading your story. I'm only on chapter 7, but this is an extremely well written story. I wish I had started it earlier! But on the bright side, I still have a lot more story to look forward to.
The unaware scenes with Mandy were great and felt beleivable. But I especially loved when Kristine discovered Sean; that felt EXTREMELY realistic and truly what a giant would do upon discovering a tiny person. Even when offering him tea, 99% of writers (myself included) would have had the giantess drop him in the cup, but the way you did with her offering some from the tip of her finger was so refreshing and fun to read.
I'm just starting chapter 8 but I am totally looking forward to the rest! I love Nicole so far too. She doesn't come off as gentle and caring as Kristine, so it will be super interesting to read her.
Keep it up man! I'll eventually catch up!
Thank you for the long review and the stars, much appreciated. I'm repeating myself, but I appreciate people enjoying my stories, so the feeling is here as well. And I have to thank you for appreciating my ideas, like the one with the tea you're mentioning here.
True, you've got some catching up to do, and I hope you will enjoy the ride. : )
Date: January 13 2020 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
An excellent chapter. Very well written. The description of shrinking in the cage and eventually ending up in Nicole's shoe was cool. Great details. Now he has a chance for the young Giantess to see him. A really great chapter.
I think I can safely say it's one of my favorite chapters of the story, among all I've written so far. But it's even better to hear you liked it. : )
Date: January 12 2020 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
This really gives you a perspective from his point of view. I like that Kristine forbids him of some things or area's and he has no choice but to obey her. He gets to look up at her as a colossal Giantess. Smell her different scents. It must be a wonderful view from the cage into the Giantess World that Kristine inhabits.
Loved when Kristine raised the cage up to her enormous gelatinous eye. How Awesome and scary. Her Goddess like soothing sweet voice. Such a cool chapter.
Even when he's being measured once Kristine lowers the cage he knows that he must obey her and enter. I think eventually he may just want to stay this size. Even if he can get back to normal it may be nice to shrink back down and remain Kristine's pet.
Ooh, I like the gelatinous eye bit. I should've thought of that. Maybe in another story. Thanks for reading!
Date: January 10 2020 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
That was a cool chapter. Loved Mandy coming over and I thought her machine was excellent. It made sense and was fun and interesting. Kristine put him back in his cage immediately. She is a loving yet controlling Giantess. I think she does view him as a pet in some ways. And in some ways he is. I still love when she opens the cage and he is trained to walk on to her fingernail. Who wouldn't obey her. I know I would. I can see leaving him at that size. He now grows at the same percentage as anyone else. Basically not at all. Maybe he grows to 3 inches tall and stops. Then Kristine can buy him a dollhouse to live in. Then this story can go a lot further.
Thanks for reading. : ) I'm not revealing what happens next and how fast will he grow, assuming he will - but I'm not revealing my plans for that either. Time will tell, stay tuned. ; )
Date: January 10 2020 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 14
This has been great so far! I'm kind of glad to hear that his return to full size might take awhile. Hopefully that means more adventures!
Thanks for the review and the stars! Glad to hear you're enjoying the ride. As for what's next for him - I wouldn't want to spoil the fun. ; )
Date: January 07 2020 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Fabulous chapter. I really liked having Kristine thinking about all the different ways he could be crushed or eaten. Really excellent stuff. I enjoyed the journey of walking down Kristine's leg. She is an Awesome woman and she does remind me of my Aunt.
I also like that he is basically trained to enter the cage when Kristine places him in front of it. I still would enjoy her saying enter the cage little one.
Also how about a chapter where Kristine places him on the tile floor of her kitchen. Letting him wander around. He can look over at how Gigantic her higheeled shoes or wedges or sandals are as she stands near him. Maybe as he continues to wander the phone rings and Kristine begins talking. Her voice is that of a Goddess up in the clouds. Maybe a small spider comes out from under her refrigerator. He starts to run for his life, screaming in fear. Kristine doesn't notice for a second or two. He continues to run knowing the 8 legged creature will eventually catch him. Suddenly an enormous loud thud lands on the floor crushing the spider. He falls down from the ground shaking power of Kristine's shoe. Are you all right my little man? The right arm goes up. Kristine holds the cage between her thumb and forefinger and lowers it in front of him. In you go little man, she says with a stern voice. He immediately obeys and is happy and relieved for the safety of the cage as Kristine places it around her neck.
Do you like it?
Wow! Thanks for the lengthy review and the stars, much appreciated.
I like your ideas. Truth is, I was thinking of inserting some unaware stuff in the story soon, but I don't have an idea where to put it yet. I'm also a fan of situations where a giantess has to save her shrinkee from an insect and would like to include that too, though I've used that very thing in my previous story and I worry about repeating myself. But you know what, I'll think of something.
Thank you once again for following the story. I still have some ideas for it left, so expect a dozen more chapters to come soon. Maybe not exactly a dozen, but I'm nowhere near coming to an end with it.
Date: January 07 2020 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
Being in the cage has certain advantages besides being safe. You have the warmth of being close to Kristine's body. The beautiful smell of her body. The relaxation of the rise and fall of her breathing. Count me in.
Yeah I wouldn't mind trading places with him myself. : )
Date: January 07 2020 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter. Kristine saying that he'd be eaten by a crab. Fabulous. Something would probably get him.
Loved the Giantess women discussing his being in the cage and Kristine saying that it's for his own good. She's totally in control. What a cool Aunt.
The journey from Nicole's foot to her thigh was great. Loved the journey . Shouldn't Nicole use the underside of her fingernail to carry him? The cupped side would be safer. Just a thought.
Will Kristine use tweezers to hold him and study him and his squirming?
I'm happy to hear you liked the journey bit, it was about time this story had some body exploration. And yeah, I guess this would've been safer, but I just loved the idea of a tiny man spread against a massive fingernail, so I went with that.
Oh, I like the tweezers idea. I'd add that to the story, but I don't know how to fit it in, especially with Kristine. Maybe I'll come back to that idea.
Thanks for reading!
Date: January 05 2020 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
I absolutely love Auntie Kristine she reminds me of my Aunt. I loved that she was a little sterner in her telling him to get in the cage. I hope Auntie Kristine continues to get sterner as she makes decisions for her little one. After all she knows best.
This is fabulous,
I wish my Aunt had me in a tiny birdcage.
I'll be honest, I've read the birdcage necklace idea in a story ages ago and I've been enamoured with it ever since. I couldn't help but implement it. Come to think of it, I used to know a girl who even had a necklace like this, except it was silver. Obviously I imagined myself in there as well. : )
Thank you for all the reviews, it was a very pleasant surprise to check my profile in the morning and see how many of them were there. And thank you for reading my story, I feel much appreciated and content that you are enjoying yourself.