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Reviewer: G Man Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2021 6:17 PM Title: Epilogue

Oh my Gosh, This story was Lovely, Sexy,and Down Right Fund84;d84;If you make a sequel ill be happy to read it!! New Reader Earnedd84;

Reviewer: Exosaur Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 19 2020 7:45 AM Title: Introduction

I love your style of writing this kind of stories, this one is actually one of my favorites from the site,h

Truly love Rachel personality and her relation with Daniel, hope to see the part 2 in the future, awesome work! 

Author's Response:

Oh god I'm so happy to hear that you liked my story that much

I'm seriously planing to do the second part but it might take me some time from college
But in the meantime you can look for my twitter where I post short size ideas and drawing I do~

Thank you so much for your review~

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2020 8:44 PM Title: Epilogue

Not sure what to tell you abhout where this story goes as you seem to want to end it.

I'm sure you could continue it to all of our enjoyment; but if you prefer to begin a new story and end this one I have to say you did a marvelous job writing this one.

Well done.  BRAVO!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews! :D

I'm gonna continue this story in some future though

Reviewer: Shrunkenman94 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2020 5:05 PM Title: Epilogue

Very well done! I do hope there will be a sequel to this!

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and liking this story!

I think I'm gonna do a sequel in some future... but not just yet

thanks for leaving a review :D

Reviewer: guiguix31 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2020 8:47 AM Title: Introduction

Hi. I really loved the next chapters, especially the sex part, good end too. Rachel is a great giantess. Thanks a lot for this story. I hope you will continue to write gentle giantess stories.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading this story and your reviews!

I hope you'll read some of my future stories :D

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2020 7:38 PM Title: The tight and moist cave of love

Even though I just commented, and you state you want to make this a short story, if you do continue it a few comments for you.

The size of 1/8" is pretty darn small, especially for Rachel to feel and fully take advantage of.  Perhaps 1/4", 1/2", or even 3/4" might be better for Rachel to feel her tiny body explorers, except for William.

If William wants to continue exploring Rachel's feet, then 1/8", the size of an ant, would be perfect.

Maybe Rachel can make any new suits so that the wearer sticks to her body.  William, at 1/8" the size of an ant, sticks to Rachel's feet and inbetween her toes.  Angela, perhaps at 1/4"-3/4" is able to stick to Rachel's breasts.  Anthony, at any size is stuck to Rachel's bowels. 

Daniel however, regardless of size, should not stick to Rachel so he may move around inside her mouth or pass through her stomach and bowels {eventually even out her asshole if that's where you care to take this} or be placed anyplace else Rachel wants him.

Is there any reason they all have to be the same size?  Is there any reason they have to be so small, except for ant man William beneath her feet and toes?

What ever you do with this story, follow what you want to do.  I'm just making comments more for my own self interest, and you have to write your stories for yourself first and foremost.

In my humble opinion, this is a story worth continuing.

Author's Response:

Thanks for this review too!

Well, the point of this story was mainly micro and the interaction that Rachel has with the group at that size

I wasn't planning on let them be bigger than that because that was the whole point of Rachel wanting them to be that small

Also, I don't think I will continue the things as I put in this scenario

If I make a sequel of this, maybe its gonna be with Angela, Rachel and Daniel as the main characters and the rest of the group is gonna be out

Thank you for reading the story so far!

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2020 7:05 PM Title: The tight and moist cave of love

This is quite the interesting and fun story.  I like it a lot.

You mention English is not your first language, and to point out any grammatical errors.  Firstly, you have way too many grammatical errors to ever try to note them all.  Secondly, you wrote your story in such a straight forward manner that is easy to read, the errors do not get in the way at all and it's simple to understand your meaning and follow along.  So don't concern yourself with any grammatical errors.

Hopefully Anthony will want to stay, or at least return to Rachel's ass.  Perhaps in the future she can make him a suit that will keep him stuck up her butt and not get pooped out. 

If Rachel ever swallows Daniel, assuming she makes him a suit to protect him from being digested, then perhaps he can pass through her bowels and then hang out with Anthony for a while inside her butt.

Please keep the story going.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!

I know I'm not that good with English but thank you for that comment about the grammatical errors, even so, I'll try my best to improve that

And with all that suggestions you made here, those are really interesting, sure, but I don't think I will apply those themes (Kind of because I don't think I can write something related to butt stuff, mainly scat tbh)

But thank you for your honest opinion :D

Reviewer: Shrunkenman94 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2020 12:43 AM Title: The tight and moist cave of love

Great story! Hope there is a sequel planned!

Author's Response:

Thank you for following this short story ^^

But I wasn't planning to making at sequel just now, I have a few ideas but for now I thought to doing other short stories for a while

Reviewer: guiguix31 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2020 10:27 AM Title: Introduction

Hi. I love your story. The gentle giantess, the feeling between Daniel and Rachel. I hope a real love gonna begin. Thanks for this story.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it so far!I really do like gentle playful giantess so I intended to others like Rachel as well
Hope your review on the next chapters :D

Reviewer: Shrunkenman94 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2020 9:18 AM Title: Introduction

Very interesting story so far. I enjoy the gentle but rough way Rachel is. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

It's all because Rachel is such a genlte and perverted girl XD
Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2019 8:18 AM Title: Introduction

interesting story!
please continue !

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I will!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2019 7:45 AM Title: Introduction

Really enjoying the story! I was hopeful they could do more with Rachel's bare feet like play hide and seek between her toes and under the bridge of her soles or even explore her giant soles. Perhaps she could let her soles face up and they climb them? Just thoughts! 

Author's Response:

I know there's a lot of things they could do, but I was planning on make this a short stroy and to take everyone to different scenarios in Rachel's body.

That andand, I'm starting with this thing of writing in english and gts content ^^'

But I take in consideration your review for probably future stories!

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