[Report This]Date: December 30 2019 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
And with that over....
And it was Amazing! Kind of sad they didn't get any action together but later I guess heheheh
Ill say if again I love how gentle she was and the romance was so freaking cute!
Thanks for answering all my comments !
I hope to read lots more from you.
P.s. I'm thinking about writing some stuff too.
Any thoughts or help you can give me?
Thanks man looking forward for more. And Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
Thank you once more for the encouragement. I'm very glad you've read my story and enjoyed it. On my part, I hope to write more soon, so once again I ask that you stay tuned. : )
As for ideas, if you like romance, you could write something that involves a loving couple of different sizes. One exemplary idea I could propose from the top of my head would be a honeymoon journey of a regular size bride and her tiny groom.
Happy New Year to you too. : )
Date: December 30 2019 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Instant classic as far as I'm concerned. I appriceate your adherence to realism (as much as possible that is), and how you keep the characters within "their lane." By this I mean, I believe their actions and how they interact with one another. She is nervous at first, but becomes more comfortable (slightly with time) in her handling. He points out how its uncomfortable at times etc.
I'm with Little Romance, hoping that something more comes of their relationship as the story presses on, but would also understand how that wouldn't fit the characters.
Also, thanks for a gentle story, it's my favorite, in general, and seems to be an outlier within the community. I hope you explore the topic more in the future and share with us!
One further question, are you also "iBelore" on deviant art? Would be interested in picking your brain on the collaging you do (I like the style and want to get into it myself).
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words, I'm happy to hear you liked my story.
Yes, keeping their personalities consistent throughout the chapters was my biggest concern, but I hope I managed to do just that. And realism too, as you pointed out. I enjoy stories that are, more or less, believable and I strived for mine to be such.
More gentle stories to come, it's the genre I feel the most comfortable at.
And finally, yes, that would be me. I'm not sure how I could help you, but I could offer some advice. Do note, my collaging skills aren't that spectacular, so if you wanted to learn something more than upper basics, you will probably have to refer to specialized guides. : ) Either way, if you need help with that, ask away.
[Report This]Date: December 30 2019 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yes I'm back. Sorry if I'm getting annoying.
It looks like were getting closed to the end....sad but excited for the ending!
Shes so gentle and kind! I wish she was real I'd totally ask her out lol.
I'm holding out for some romance in the end (wink) she does seem to think hes cute or is that just because hes small? Hopefully the first one hehehe
Keep it coming! I'm looking forward to the finale!
Author's Response:
Hello once more. Don't worry, you're not. I'm actually happy to get a feedback.
And yes, we're slowly nearing the end. I don't want to spoil anything, for obvious reasons, but please stay tuned. : )
[Report This]Date: December 28 2019 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Intresting idea I was under how this is going to end?
Are they just friends? Or will there be some romance?
Keep it going mate!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm happy to hear you found the idea interesting. : )
I haven't imagined them as other than friends, at least not for the moment.
And I will keep going, I still have to finish this story. ; )