Date: January 12 2020 5:25 AM Title: Ashes
I would love to see another chapter where she comes out again and is surprised to see tiny movement again. She sits down for a relaxing smoke. Maybe she uses the cigarette to move him around? She still flicks ashes at him. I'd love to see you do a part 2.
What do you think?
Your ideas are very valuable and I enjoy hearing them, thanks for sharing. I'll keep them in mind I ever feel like writing a continuation of that particular story.
Date: January 10 2020 8:53 PM Title: Ashes
That was incredibly well written. Loved her thinking about how she felt about him at the different stages of his inevitable shrinking. Now her cold indifference to his plight. Absolutely loved her playing with him as he runs from her flicked ashes. Her blowing smoke was really excellent. Her moving butts and making him run was sooo cool. Her leaving him there. The thought of her coming back out later for another smoke and doing it again is enticing. That was a chilling story. One of my favorites.
Thank you! It makes me glad you liked this story as well. It sticks out from others on my profile, but it's good to hear it was enjoyable nevertheless. Thanks for reading!