[Report This]Date: December 28 2019 2:14 AM Title: Prologue
Very Intresting story mate! Looking forward to more. I hope he finds happiness somehow....
Will he end up with Katelyn? Maybe theyll meet up again?
I just want him to be happy.
Ok enough of my ramblings. Great story mate
keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2019 11:50 PM Title: Sarah
There is probably more to it. But betrayel from your loved ones always hurt.
In your hour of need, you will see who your true friends are.
Good chapter again.
Author's Response:
Thank you! And what you said is very true.
[Report This]Date: December 27 2019 5:17 PM Title: Prologue
Hi, Benton. I'm really enjoying the story! Shot you a message on GTSWorld. Thanks for writing, and I look forward to reading more!
[Report This]Date: December 27 2019 5:08 AM Title: Barney
Good chapter again. Interesting to see the family and friends dynamic and the personal stuff Paul has to go through. The interesting questions people will ask themselves. The setting is more interesting than I thought. We almost forget that the normal sized people are vastly outnumbered.
Glad your back.
Couldn't agree with gtsfan4321's review and your answer.
I also like those type of stories.
Try my GTS story by the way. I also try to focus on realism and what such events would cause.
http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=6816
https://www.deviantart.com/barrowman2012/gallery/
Date: December 26 2019 1:15 PM Title: Doris's Choice
Really loving this story so far. My favorite are realistic stories - that are clearly well written with a developed storyline - and this is a perfect example. The world you created is so great, I hope this story lasts a very long time. I'm interested to see him interacting with each of the characters introduced so far, looking forward to what's next!
I hope the positive feedback from everyone will make you consider writing more in the future. Either in this 'world' or just other stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you! The worldbuilding comest out of a mental exersize I asked myself: "What would happen if 99% of everyone shrunk? What would happen in 2 years? 10? 50? 200?" And then this story basically grew out of that.
Right now I'm planning on focusing my energies on other things besides this kind of writing, but who knows, never say never.
[Report This]Date: December 26 2019 4:05 AM Title: Doris's Choice
Wow, so Paul is a Small now and this story has taken a dark tone. It’s incredible! I actually got nervous and scared for Paul. I feel really bad for him and his new reality. It really teaches you something when you get to experience a new side of life.
I love the scenes with Katelyn! It was so deep and touching! She is the only one who probably could help Paul adjust to the situation. I could feel the tension as they realize that it was only a matter of time until they got separated.
I’m alright with Sarah being his new owner. I thought it would be someone we haven’t met yet, but I guess it makes sense since his mom doesn’t want people to know and she trusts Sarah, being the eldest daughter.
I’m curious how Paul’s life will be like with Sarah. I wonder if he will meet her companion and maybe he will say something such as “Bro, I fucked your sister” or something like that. Sarah seems to be a nice woman, so I think her companion is probably a nice guy too.
It would be interesting if Paul gets to see a new side of Sarah, whether it’s she treats him like an object or maybe she plays with her companion right in front of Paul. There might be times when Sarah might get drunk and accidentally think Paul is her companion. ;) That should be fun. (Maybe not for Paul).
I love the frequent uploads. Probably helps that you got the story already written out. It also keeps my interest before I forget about the previous chapters.
Nonetheless, I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. I won't give anything away, but you're about to learn a lot about Sarah and her companion.
Date: December 25 2019 1:04 PM Title: Prologue
Nice but.. I keep dreaming about the third season of the shrinking show
[Report This]Date: December 25 2019 2:52 AM Title: Meet Paul, the Big
Interesting story, Benton.
Let's see where this goes. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: December 24 2019 6:58 AM Title: Hannah
Benton!
It’s been so long! My goodness am I glad to see you after all these years! I don’t know if you remember me, but I guess I would say that I was there when you wrote the second shrinking show story.
Do you remember the Carla and Andy dynamic? That was my favorite. It’s funny because 4 years ago, you replied to my review stating that you almost finished a spin off story with Carla and Andy. Well, that never happened, so I guess I was a bit disappointed. However, the scenes of them that took place in the shrinking show were definitely top notch.
I’m glad you are back though! It’s a little saddening to see you say this is your last story. I can tell things have changed since you haven’t posted for a while now until today.
Now about this story. Whoa, your writing has improved significantly! I remember you used to write a story around sexy scenes and all I looked forward to was the crazy sexual interactions between people.
Now, after reading the first 4 chapters of this, I’m actually caring about the story. I was expecting to meet the characters in the first chapter and Paul shrinks at the end of it, and then the 2nd chapter and on will be about his shrunken adventures.
However, you surprised me with some in-depth background info of all the characters. It seems you have also planned this story out very well since you are uploading each chapter rapidly.
I like the theme of the story, a giant becoming tiny and he gets a new side to life as he can compare his tiny version to his preexisting giant life in the past. Also, his interactions with all the females would change.
Sarah seems to be my favorite girl here. She seems mature and knows how to handle situations. Brie seems annoying, but I think that’s how you wanted her to be. Hannah seems nice, but relatively boring at the moment. She seems like an average girl that is nice to him. Jen seems horny, but Paul’s dislike to her seems to spread to me, because now even I dislike Jen too.
I’m very interested in the mom’s reaction since she actually didn’t want the tinies to have rights. Now that should be fun to see. Does she respect the bill she proposes or her son more? We will have to wait. There will be times where she has to make a decision and I can’t wait to see that.
Overall, I’m impressed with the quality of this story and how you make us care about the characters before inviting us to Paul’s giantess journey. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I remember you from your comments on the Shrinking Show back in the day. It makes sense that this story is very different; I wrote the Shrinking Show when I was in my early 20s, I'm in my mid 30s now. This is far more "plot with porn" than "porn with plot", though the story is rated X for a reason as you will soon see. I'm happy that you find the characters interesting and are getting invested in them! Also, the story is done; I am uploading each chapter as I proofread them.
[Report This]Date: December 24 2019 6:31 AM Title: Prologue
Wow, what a fantastic story. I do hope you continue this as the quality of writing and world-building are truly immersive.
Author's Response:
I appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: December 24 2019 5:40 AM Title: Hannah
Very nice story. I can't wait to see what will happen when he shrinks.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: December 23 2019 7:50 PM Title: Prologue
Nice concept! Looking forward to reading more about this world!
Author's Response:
Thanks!