[Report This]Date: January 26 2020 10:47 PM Title: The Box
I love it that you go for the story and the psychological stuff. These are the best size difference stories.
I dislike the pure smut stories. There are so many off them on this site, that good stories like this one are harder too find.
No one is perfect and the family itself is probably under a lot of pressure.
But when you treat your family members like this, there is NO excuse.
There could be more to it that Paul has created a more diffucult situation for the family than we realize. We don't know al the facts yet. I still dislike Sarah and his family, not someone I want to be friends with.
People really underestimate solitary confinement.
What is also interesting about shrinking stories is trust and betrayal and finding out who your real friends are.
Interesting possibilities brought up by other reviewers.
Good story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
It's hard to know exactly what Paul's family truly thinks about the situation because we only see through Paul's eyes. It's generally considered an embarassment if there's a Shrinker in your family--it's a cultural norm that's developed in Big society--but most families aren't as dead-set on making their shrinker "go away" as Paul's family is.
[Report This]Date: January 26 2020 5:20 AM Title: The Box
I thought I was clever predicting that Paul would be taken out of the box soon to continue the story.
Somehow you created an entire chapter with Paul stuck in the box. The young Benton would have needed something else to happen to make the story progress. However, Im impressed by how you used his inner thoughts to weave memories, dreams, and maybe some sort of telepathy to Katelyn.
Not much else to say about this chapter. I just still can’t believe you wrote an entire chapter with Paul still stuck in the box! Lol.
Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter, and if Paul is still in the box, I don’t know what I’m going to do, haha.
Author's Response:
Tbh I even surprised myself that I was able to pull off a full chapter about a man in a box.
[Report This]Date: January 25 2020 9:18 PM Title: The Box
Another amazing chapter. Really liked how you depicted him going crazy in sensory deprivation. Even when people have room to move around, solitary confinement takes a real toll on your mind. People who have been put in solitary confinement for 20 days report that their ability to distinguish reality from what’s being made up by their head disappears. It really fucks with you, having absolutely nothing to do, no stimuli at all. It’s torture.
But anyway, sad stuff all around. Pail needs a hug, but judging by the tags on this story, it will be a very long time before he gets treated warmly by anyone again.
Author's Response:
Yeah, solitary confinement is brutal. Thankfully I don't know from first-hand experience.