Date: January 14 2020 5:01 AM Title: Adjusting
Quite a few interesting plot points your building up:
1. Paul's mother's senatorial campaign goals/plans about tiny life improvement, and why having a shrinker son is negative(?) to her goals.
2.Which bigs he eventually interacts with and how badly they treat him (notice the cest tag).
3. Bethany's developing tryst with Paul. Genuine or is she just using him as a chance to secure her future based on how her shrinker dad and his tiny wife got to stay with his family?
4. How Sarah and his family will act if he becomes a father? Joy, indifference, or possibly even outrage?
5.The future beating Barney will give him if he finds out Paul slept with Bethany and if Sarah condones it or steps in.
6.Barney's deus ex machina elevator for a future escapade? Run Paul run.
7.And finally who the future grower (or growers) will be in this story.
Excited to see how this story develops.
Author's Response:
Thank you!