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Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2021 11:46 PM Title: Prologue

You should do a sequel! Or something new in the same universe. This was spectacular

Reviewer: LostSoul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2020 7:05 PM Title: His Final Home

Great story! I love the detail and world building you do with this story. I'm kind of happy yet sad on the ending of this story and the ending of Scott. In a way, it's kind of tragic that he's stuck with a girl that obsesses over him. Idk if that's a good thing or bad, but seeing as she sold her other companions, there's probably a lot of work coming Paul's way.

 

I really wish there was an epiologue but from reading your blog, it looks like this is the end. Thanks Benson, you're an amazing writer!

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2020 2:22 AM Title: His Final Home

After reading the first few chapters again, it makes the story even sadder.... I wish Paul ended up with Hannah. But eventually Doris and Hannah would have to find out what happened right?! If not Doris which is fucked up considering she’s Paul’s mother, Hannah said he and her would meet up soon to study so she’d definitely notice something is wrong. I want to believe maybe Hannah will find out and fight to buy and take care of Paul and who knows maybe even be lovers despite their size difference. Ughhh I hate how it ended for Paul.

Reviewer: Small Scavanger Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2020 7:07 AM Title: Prologue

Enjoying the concept of "breeding" tinies. I always felt like it was a concept the community never really explored. 

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2020 1:51 AM Title: Prologue

It felt like the story could still keep on going from here, showing Hannah and Katelyn's points of view and their thoughts on Paul and how they're currently doing. It's a bit of a shame these things will go unanswered.

 

But as for the story, it's still very well written and it was quite a journey reading each chapter and seeing Paul try to deal with being small and handled by his sisters and their companions. I hope there'll be a follow up to it some day!

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2020 8:42 PM Title: His Final Home

Well I certainly wasn’t expecting this to ending... I was kinda hoping since you dropped that revelation that a small can become a big again that maybe it would apply to Paul but I guess not.
I’m still shocked Brie his own sister not only treated him like shit but sold him like did the last 18 years of being a big brother completely erase from her mind? Same with Sarah. I kinda don’t understand how family of all people would treat another member like an object. I don’t know if Sarah knows about this but still, she as well treated Paul poorly.

I’m also disappointed in that you made a big deal about Doris, the mom being a powerful senator wanting change yet she completely disappears after like chapter 4 or 5. Would’ve been nice to see how the progress was going. Is Doris trying her best? How did she feel going back to work about the idea that one or her kids is now a tiny. Like we didn’t see ANY of that, I was hoping the MOM of all people would at least protect him. Now we won’t know how she will react when she gets back from work and learns what Brie did.
And of course we never got to see it she won the battle for smalls rights or if she has to deal with the fact that smalls are stuck suffering.

As for Paul, I hate that he didn’t get a good ending. At the very least if he was going to be stuck as a small, the idea of ending up with Hannah would’ve made all this hell worth it at least. I’m surprised he doesn’t want to end his life as a result of the pain. Jen seems nice now but judging by how she reacted when Paul mentioned heather she seems like another Brie incoming.

I also wish we could’ve explored more of heather and Paul’s relationship, like we could’ve seen how good natured she is and stuff.

I’m surprised it ended all of a sudden, I felt like there could’ve been a lot more details to be discussed but I guess that’s just how it is, Paul is going to continue in hell until death...

Overall, it was an okay read, just needed More explanations.

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2020 7:05 PM Title: His Final Home

It looks like Paul might end up in a decent place since Jen seems a little obsessed with Paul granting him some liberties but that probably won't happen. Kind of wanted Paul to mature a little while staying at Brie's but that didnt happen seems he might have turned into a bigger wimp.

Pauls sister's might end up bring screwed when his Mom finds out he has been sold even if she doesnt care for him. How will it look if her tiny son is owned by another Politician while she is trying to push for tiny rights. If Doris does care for Paul his sisters will probably end up even more screwed especially if she finds out how he was treated by them and the other tinies. Wonder if Hannah would have wanted to keep Paul and treat him well. Also did Katelyn really love Paul. Guess we will never know.

Overall this was a good read that ended too soon as many people before me have said.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2020 11:39 PM Title: Defeated

Wait, only 1 chapter left? I thought this was maybe a third of the way into the story. I thought maybe Paul would be passed onto Hannah or maybe reunited with Katelyn or something.

Since the parts with Brie took a good percentage of the story, I assumed this Paul would have long sessions like this with other characters as well.

Hmm. Well, in terms of an ending, he could die? Maybe he grows back to normal somehow. The one happy ending I want to see is if Hannah shows up and collects him.

Basically Paul has been with Brie for a while now, so if there’s one chapter left, Paul is likely to still be with Brie. So it’s hard to predict something other than Brie doing something to Paul.

Well, I can’t wait for this next chapter!

(Also, I’m wondering if you considered making a spinoff story of the shrinking show featuring Carla and Andy from season 2? I think they stole the show and I would love to see more of them. Maybe they return for season 3 and show the new contestants the benefits of shrinking. Lol)

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2020 4:20 AM Title: Prologue

I'm still hoping Hannah shows up at the end, I had been hoping for her to eventually discover Paul in his shrunken state ever since I started reading your story way back.

Reviewer: sandman579 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 22 2020 12:29 AM Title: Defeated

Hmm, if the story is only getting one more chapter I feel like it will leave a lot of unfinished plot lines. Is his mother going to enact law changes in the Senate? I recall she was proposing allowing Smalls the right to chose who/where they live with/at. Is it implied Paul will try to live with his old crush Hannah, try to move to a new plain Small community, be too broken spiritually to ask for a transfer, or be held in captivity by his family as an embarrassment? If Brie feels like she's sufficently broken him will she sell him off to the girl Paul avoided, Jen, whose father is a powerful senator?

 

You revealed quite the Chekov's gun with the revelation that a Small can sometimes grow to be a big. Will you truly let Paul or one of the tiny women who cared for him become a Big, such as Kate or Bethany growing and claiming him?

 

Then there's the fact that outside the repopulated cities most of the country is considered wild and only populated with Smalls communities. Paul's father was a border soldier killed by a trap laid by Smalls was he not? They've yet to make an appearance in the story.

 

I've enjoyed the world building and storytelling up to this point, and I'm sad that you've chosen to end it so abruptly.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: June 21 2020 11:14 PM Title: Defeated

Disappointed in this story. I dislike incest fetish, but the over the top unrealistic behavior is even worse. Also the story doesn't progress as we have to see 500 unrealistic abuses first before continuing further.

You have written some quality stories in the past with believable transitions and human behavior. 

This story started interesting, but now lazy pure lame fetish stuff. 

Reviewer: ReclaimerChief17 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2020 9:00 PM Title: Defeated

this story was so upsetting for Paul... I hope he gets his wish of being Hannah’s owner of somehow grows back again.

I gotta say I’m surprised the mother wasn’t in most of the story, I mean both the sisters were complete assholes to him, i figured at least THE MOTHER of all people would still care about her child. I hope the last chapter is lengthy because I feel like there’s still so much to explore. We saw the mom fighting for smalls rights. Maybe she was successful in the last chapter? Hopefully.

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2020 8:50 PM Title: Sister's Revenge

That was fantastic!

Paul is so lucky to have such a sister like Brie.

More of Paul worshipping his sister's feet, please?

 

Reviewer: FreemanCD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2020 11:03 PM Title: Prologue

This is such a fucking good story because it’s so unpleasant to read. I just really want Paul to get a leg up but the degradation and pain feels so visceral, it’s great

The writing makes the size of characters feel so much more real than most of the other stories on this site and I’m not sure what it is, but it’s super effective.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2020 7:43 AM Title: Selected

Really happy you are still planning to finish Paul's story, and what a great chapter! We got to see some psychological insight of Paul after all the recent events, especially with Brie, and some interesting questions were also brought up.

I am guessing we will have some insight on Brie's side on the next chapter as she and Paul will be all alone, no team, no Sarah or Doris.

Thank you! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2020 2:40 PM Title: Prologue

Great to see you're still working on the story!

Reviewer: Pinobr Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11 2020 12:36 PM Title: Prologue

Great return

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2020 4:08 PM Title: Prologue

Bump for an update!

Reviewer: Aberic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2020 7:46 PM Title: Team Building Exercises

Loving the story a pity its been on hiatus for the past couple of months. Hoping to see more of Brie and her new dominion over Paul, the team building exercises has to be one of my favourite chapters.

Looking forward to reading more, keep up the good work and keep safe in these hectic times.

Reviewer: Pinobr Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2020 3:44 AM Title: Prologue

Please men,

Don't stop this story, is the best on the bord.

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