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Reviewer: Ronaldinho10 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2020 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please continue this.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2020 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

What awesome first chapter. You set the scene very well. I hope a mother comes in to purchase him.

Reviewer: Baileytommy975 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2019 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Are you going to add to the story because if you do I hope it gets more interesting 



Author's Response:

Of course! This is going to be a 5 chapter story, which is definitely going to get more interesting. First chapters are often just intros and setting. 

Reviewer: LittleRomance Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2019 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm love the idea!!! Hopefully his new family is friendly but teasing. 

And maybe some (hopefully) romance?

Hehe anyways great start looking forward to more 

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2019 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love this concept! I’m really looking forward to see what happens next. Very well written too, I love the indifference and casualness of the clerk.

Reviewer: BobGreen Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2019 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ooooo I like this one! I love it when there's a race bigger than the humans! Whether it be Aliens, Gods, or whatever the heck. It's kinda my thing. Looking forward to see more of these. Hope that we get to see more of the clerk before we see his new owner!

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