Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21 2019 6:29 PM Title: Last Chance

You make it clear English is not your first language, so I have no issue with grammatical errors.  That said, I like the way your story is playing out so far.  Hopefuly you post more to your story and soon.

Emma sounds quite hot.  I am excited to see if she plays a "dominant" role in your story.