Date: November 30 2019 6:17 PM Title: Ann
I hadn't realized Sharon plays with their minds so much.
It could be an interesting twist if instead of saying how much Chris and Ann love one another, they instead state how much they both love Sharon; and then make love while each of them think about Sharon, either freely or not.
Sharon could ask them afterwards which was better, being in love with each other while having sex, or being in love with and thinking of her while having sex with each other.
It would be nice to hear some prayer sessions to Sharon.
Oh, putting the drive, their entire existance in her back pocket was a great touch. Perhaps Sharon could put the drive elsewhere on her body such as in her clevage.
You have a unique concept going on here, please continue on.
Author's Response:
Glad you're liking it so far!
I wound up making the next chapter be about prayers to her. In looking after a world with so many people in it, prayers just seems like the most practical way to interact with them without having to worry about things like burning out socially :p