Date: October 03 2020 8:35 PM Title: Day 1
Fantastic story, thanks for posting. :)
It's been a while since I've waited for updates so eagerly, and after reading all 3 parts of Day 23 I'm glad I kept following along.
As much as I was hoping for an ending where Reese failed and was stuck with being a servant to his sister, her friends, and their mom, this ending was perfectly in tone with the rest of the story and I'm not sure if it could have been done better.
Excited to see future stories from you. I'll have to check out the daughter/dad one soon. Will future spiritual sequels feature a similar amount, if not more, foot content? It would be wonderful to see Reese under Olivia's feet whilst they're stinky hehe, in the rewrite you've mentioned in other replies.
thank you! last few chapters were definitely a nice treat for anyone who loyally followed along, and yes, while a stuck servant idea mightve been nice i dont think it wouldve worked. and its the last chapter so whats the difference anyways :P
the rewrite of brother has more foot content but since her boobs and butt are big too i'm trying to make it a bit more evened out. but dad/daughter will have more foot content tho imo, idk if any of my stories will ever just be one thing.
btw i loved your beneath the bullies story :)
Date: October 03 2020 11:51 AM Title: Day 23, Part 3
This was a really good story. Loved the characters and their interactions with each other. Towards the end I though Jordan was going to sit on Reese but she was just teasing him about his sister. I cant wait for the version where he shrinks really small and see how different it goes for him. I hope he ends up small enough to get lost on his sister's thong ;)
oh dont worry, he'll be sat on next version, and there'll be a MUCH more interesting thong interaction even though he won't be super tiny yet :) thanks for the review!
Date: October 02 2020 3:20 AM Title: Day 23, Part 3
So we need a sequel now.
Reece ends up still failing, which leads to him having to retake his senior year and another year of servitude for Olivia.
Would also like a spinoff series featuring more torture from jordan
hahaha ill take that to mean you liked it. ngl i DID think about making a sequel series but i'd rather just rewrite it with him being even smaller but add a bunch of totally new scenes, and since he shrunk "naturally" isntead of something sci-fi-ish like a size ray, i wouldnt be able to make him shrink again anyways without a rewrite cuz im too much of a stickler for a nice consistent story canon to suddenly change everything up.
but dont worry, the point is, more reese/olivia action is coming plus more jordan and some new characters :)
Date: August 22 2020 4:24 PM Title: Day 19
Oh I thought we were finally get some big breasts for our little guy.....was hoping sister would start to get aroused by her power.... thought we might have curiousity abt how small he might be in other areas lol... still loving it though
thanks for writing !
i can only think of so many natural scenarios where he sticks his face in his sister's tits 😣
Date: August 14 2020 8:32 PM Title: Day 1
This story needs to go on hold until we get a few more chapters in how to train your father, 😆 🤣 😂
i understand how you feel! but this one is only a few chapters from the end, so i wanted to rush to finish this one first while still updating the father one every sunday. otherwise i'd have two stories that wont be finished for several more months if i gave them equal attention :P
Date: August 12 2020 3:03 AM Title: Day 16
This story needs several sequels to it. One of the few stories I look forward to seeing updates from
thank you! im planning on a slow-shrink roommate one as the third story, but thatll be after getting some good progress on the father/daughter one
Date: August 02 2020 5:49 PM Title: Day 1
This series is definitely one of the best ones I've ever read. So many fetish writers jump right into the action with little to no context, which completely takes away the thrill and the eroticism. You manage to make the relationship between the two ever more sexual and alluring without making the story feel unrealistic. You are very gifted and I wish I could write as well as you do! The only small criticism I have is that when your story arrives at a climax (like rubbing her feet, doing her nails, etc.), the day tends to end without describing that situation in more detail.
I really hope you will continue this series. I will probably be checking daily. I also read the first chapter of your new story "How to Train your Father in 23 Days or Less" which I also can't wait to be continued :-)
good point! i dont feel good at writing descriptions, like theres only so many words and phrases i can use so many times before i feel like im being repetitive. thats probably why the climaxes feel like that. but you have a good point, thanks for the feedback, hopefully i can improve in the future!
Date: July 27 2020 10:34 PM Title: Day 12
Wow, I don't check the site as much these days but glad I caught an update for this. Don't get me wrong, I adore cruel giantesses and incredibly cruel, humiliating action, but this more subtle and PG form of domination is wonderful.
The whole innocent sibling dynamic side to things really give this story a realistic flair, which makes it somewhat more believeable. I am itching for Reese to have to rub Oliva's feet when they're a little more aromatic, however I understand that there's still plenty of time for such things.
Can't wait for more chapters, as well as whatever you have planned following this story. Keep up the great work!
thank you so much :)
making them "innocent" as you called it was definitely intentional for the exact reasons you mentioned, i wanted to give it a realistic flair so it feels more believable. also why i made the sizes realistic too, and why i made the two of them get along fine (like most siblings i know), along with reese not being "into" any of this for the same reasons. everything i could do to make the story rooted in reality. any more extreme domination from olivia than what i have planned, or lust from reese, or bigger difference in size, and suddenly it goes from fiction to fantasy in my mind.
but its also fun to read fantasy sometimes, like you said, which is why i wanna make alternate versions. the only constant will be the main characters disliking their domination (especially from family members), since that usually brings me out of other stories more than anything else. i can only hope most other people's online taboos dont align with their real-life desires, haha. but thanks again!