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Reviewer: foreignkanto Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2019 8:16 PM Title: Day 2

Hey, enjoying the story so far. I’m a fan of these kinds of slow fade stories. It’ll be interesting to see how their relationship develops over time.

Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you're enjoying :)

Reviewer: duck12345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 17 2019 3:40 PM Title: Day 1

Big sister small brother? Yes yes yes! Personally hoping for foot and odour domination, but I'm sure whatever form of domination you choose will be great.

From your summary, this sounds like it'll be very interesting and unique. Can't wait for more. :)

Author's Response:

Feet should come into the story very casually and briefly on day 5. Rubbing and smelling will be a big thing week 2 and by weeks 3 and 4 he'll be doing a lot more for her than most normal brothers do for their sisters :P

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2019 1:10 PM Title: Day 2

I actually wrote out a positive feedback for "Day 1" after you posted it; but this site said I could not post at that time and my comments were lost.

Though I personally would prefer stepsister / stepbrother, you have an interesting story going on.

I like the unrushed aspect of the Dominant / submissive relationship building up between Reese and Olivia.

One thing I am curious about {and had commented on in my first attempt at posting} is will Reese shrink any further?  Will he shrink from Olivia's dominance, or the onset of winter {which would be more than 29 days away since it's the start of summer}.

Definitely do continue.


Author's Response:

Personally, I don't see the difference between stepsibling stuff and blood relation, at least on a moral level. Like, if you find out you were adopted, does that suddenly make it fine to have feelings for your sibling? On a primal, genetic level it's the actual relation that makes those kind of things messed up but from a social aspect, with how people judge you, there's almost no difference. I've never really seen anyone who thinks that things happening between stepsiblings in real life is totally fine, but if they're related it's totally wrong.  So that's why I didn't specify, because I didn't think it matters. "Either it's all OK, or none of it's OK." Also, I tried to make it very clear via Reese's thoughts in chapter 1 (and 2) that he has no feelings towards his sister. That won't change, and she won't develop anything for him either. "Sexual things" will happen eventually (not actual sex), but it will be more about her controlling him than anything. Power, not love or lust. I don't have any plans for either of them to get turned on by any of the experiences.

So with that in mind, and with that being said, it's not important to the story that they're blood related and there's no mention in the story (or do I plan on there being) of Tracy specifically birthing Olivia and Reese with Stuart as the dad. The important part is the relationship dynamic that they share as people who grew up as a "family" together. If you want to imagine them as stepsiblings, I can assure you there won't be anything in the story that will break that head canon :)

Reese won't shrink any further, not as a slow size change at least - although the next versions will see him at around 3 feet, 1.5 feet, and 8 inches. I liked that idea because then I don't have to wonder like I do with other slow size change stories - oh, what if he shrunk just a bit earlier? Or just a bit later? I can see how the interactions would carry out over each size, you know? It'll be awhile before I get around to those iterations but they're definitely coming and I have plans for how they're going to be different and add new subplots, and not just changing up a few words. I think most instant size change stories either have the main character having been at that size their whole life, or they make themselves that height, or someone else does. So I like designing my story like this because neither Olivia or Reese wanted him to be small, but it's a relatively new experience for both of them. 

Whew quite the response haha! Thanks for your feedback and questions though!

Reviewer: Max333 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2019 5:35 AM Title: Day 1

Loving it so far ! I'm really interested of what's to come, his descent into submission and his sister's way toward domination :D

Keep it up !

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Reviewer: romaescipion Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2019 4:54 AM Title: Day 2

me parece excepcional y se me hara eterno esperar a ver como se desarrolla todo,ver como la hermana le esclaviza lentamente y leer situaciones de humillacion y sumision de vReese,muchas gracias y animo,continua igual de bien

Author's Response:

Gracis! Alegra que te guste

Reviewer: cixelsyd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2019 4:43 PM Title: Day 1

Exploring the setting from different starring points is nifty! Looking forward to see the different choices made across the parallel adventures. =)

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

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