Date: November 10 2020 8:08 AM Title: Day 7: Just Kinda Damp
Slow-burn stories like these are the best on this site, and I think yours are definitely top tier. All the unaware and accidental moments are just sooo good. Plus adding pictures to help visualize the story is going above and beyond.
I've read both versions so far, but I gotta say version two is turning out to be the best. I love the intial height difference and the more pestering sister. If there was one thing to suggest, it would be a drunken unaware scene showing off Olivia's more 'wild' side.
Can't wait for the rest, and imma keep my eyes out for How to Train Your Son. 👀
Author's Response:
thank you so much! i've read your oh brother story before (maybe even both? cant remember) and there were a few scenes that provided inspiration for my own :) and yeah second version is definitely better, first was way too slow but 2nd is coming along nice
[Report This]Date: November 06 2020 4:09 AM Title: Day 7: Just Kinda Damp
Do Olivia and Jordan need help knowing how low to go on their squats? Maybe they also relax in a sauna afterwards? Would love to read more about Olivia wearing Reece in her clothes
This is my vote for story of the year! Can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! no squatting in next chapter but there'll be some butt-related stuff so dont worry