Date: August 22 2020 4:24 PM Title: Day 19
Oh I thought we were finally get some big breasts for our little guy.....was hoping sister would start to get aroused by her power.... thought we might have curiousity abt how small he might be in other areas lol... still loving it though
thanks for writing !
i can only think of so many natural scenarios where he sticks his face in his sister's tits 😣
Date: August 14 2020 8:32 PM Title: Day 1
This story needs to go on hold until we get a few more chapters in how to train your father, 😆 🤣 😂
i understand how you feel! but this one is only a few chapters from the end, so i wanted to rush to finish this one first while still updating the father one every sunday. otherwise i'd have two stories that wont be finished for several more months if i gave them equal attention :P
Date: August 12 2020 3:03 AM Title: Day 16
This story needs several sequels to it. One of the few stories I look forward to seeing updates from
thank you! im planning on a slow-shrink roommate one as the third story, but thatll be after getting some good progress on the father/daughter one
Date: August 02 2020 5:49 PM Title: Day 1
This series is definitely one of the best ones I've ever read. So many fetish writers jump right into the action with little to no context, which completely takes away the thrill and the eroticism. You manage to make the relationship between the two ever more sexual and alluring without making the story feel unrealistic. You are very gifted and I wish I could write as well as you do! The only small criticism I have is that when your story arrives at a climax (like rubbing her feet, doing her nails, etc.), the day tends to end without describing that situation in more detail.
I really hope you will continue this series. I will probably be checking daily. I also read the first chapter of your new story "How to Train your Father in 23 Days or Less" which I also can't wait to be continued :-)
good point! i dont feel good at writing descriptions, like theres only so many words and phrases i can use so many times before i feel like im being repetitive. thats probably why the climaxes feel like that. but you have a good point, thanks for the feedback, hopefully i can improve in the future!
Date: July 27 2020 10:34 PM Title: Day 12
Wow, I don't check the site as much these days but glad I caught an update for this. Don't get me wrong, I adore cruel giantesses and incredibly cruel, humiliating action, but this more subtle and PG form of domination is wonderful.
The whole innocent sibling dynamic side to things really give this story a realistic flair, which makes it somewhat more believeable. I am itching for Reese to have to rub Oliva's feet when they're a little more aromatic, however I understand that there's still plenty of time for such things.
Can't wait for more chapters, as well as whatever you have planned following this story. Keep up the great work!
thank you so much :)
making them "innocent" as you called it was definitely intentional for the exact reasons you mentioned, i wanted to give it a realistic flair so it feels more believable. also why i made the sizes realistic too, and why i made the two of them get along fine (like most siblings i know), along with reese not being "into" any of this for the same reasons. everything i could do to make the story rooted in reality. any more extreme domination from olivia than what i have planned, or lust from reese, or bigger difference in size, and suddenly it goes from fiction to fantasy in my mind.
but its also fun to read fantasy sometimes, like you said, which is why i wanna make alternate versions. the only constant will be the main characters disliking their domination (especially from family members), since that usually brings me out of other stories more than anything else. i can only hope most other people's online taboos dont align with their real-life desires, haha. but thanks again!
Date: July 24 2020 3:10 PM Title: Day 11
I love this story but I'm wishing there was a little more noticing of the sisters big breasts plz
i think i had a fair amount of that in the beginning but yeah its tapered off. just him noticing how big she is in general has sorta died down. it's still a size story and obviously a size site so i'll try to mention more again, thanks for mentioning
Date: July 23 2020 5:12 AM Title: Day 11
Been eagerly awaiting this chapter and it lived up to the hype for me! Reese has embraced his changing relationship with Olivia and I'm immensely curious to see how private they choose to keep it or if her new role as mentor eventually results in the whole family acknowledging their new happy dynamic. As I also a sucker for a happy ending, hopefully Olivia's benevolent guidance ultimately betters Reese as much as it lowers him :p
The chapter note mentioned that, as so many popular writers and stories can attest to, there truly is no pleasing everyone at once. But, even more content is a more than acceptable substitute!
well done and happily awaiting your future work, including this story and its continuations!
thank you for the feedback :) interesting to hear of someone awaiting this chapter since i didn't mention 11 would be an important one - but i guess as it is about the midpoint, some kind of major change is to be expected. good eye, and thanks for reading!
Date: July 23 2020 1:39 AM Title: Day 11
I kind of like this honestly.
Olivia seems kind of devious at times but really she seems to genuinely care for her brother and he seems to be a closet sub who enjoys his time with her.
100% lol u almost exactly nailed it. definitely trying to paint her as a considerate person who genuinely loves her brother, but is also a little (unawarely) fun/pushy. he's definitely a closet sub, and im not sure if ill ever even make him realize it haha