[Report This]Date: January 01 2020 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 3: Girl & Boy Partner Up
This chapter makes the new year even better. I can't see the previous versions of this chapter, but I can say this one turned out really good.
Now Todd has simultaneously the sweetest and most powerful girlfriend in the world. She seems so gentle and luckily shares nothing with Jack's ex-gf (Caitlin right?).
Jade knows how to convince a guy, that kiss was a power move!
Those giantess really practiced their sneaking up skills, I'd expect them to be quite a bit more noticable and Earth shaking at that party. And I can quite imagine why those people that kidnapped Jack pissed themselves when Jessica showed up, but they could have predicted that of course. They shouldn't have pissed her off in the first place.
Do we get some moments where Jade subtly displays her strength like that too? I'd like that for one.
Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response:
The other versions never had the right vibe to it, that's all I can say.
Yeah Jade is no Caitlin, which is good news for everyone because a giant brat would be the end of the world for most people.
There's a reason why the Earth doesn't shake when they walk or move about in general, which will be revealed later on in the story. The kidnappers probably thought Jessica would cave, but she's one tough babe who doesn't take to threats kindly.
There will be moments where Jade and Jessica do display subtly their strengths or abilities. When and where, that I won't say.
Thanks for the review!