[Report This]Date: November 18 2019 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 2: Boy Dines With Girl
Still nice to hear that we will hear a bit more about Jessica and Jack in the future.
Sounds like Jade's friend is a bit overly concerned. Maybe they should to a tug of war to demonstrate a point sometime, because maybe he forgot Jade's pure strength after being friends and treating her like a normal person for so long.
Also nice to see Todd and Jade having a nice dinner. Thank you for adding details like the ultra huge spoons, it really gives some sense of scale to the story and sets it apart from a "shrunken" story. I like that.
And finally, thank you for writing and adding another chapter.
Author's Response:
Do a tug of war? That would be really one sided. I think the whole campus could pull on her finger and it wouldn't even budge it. Jade could easily end Todd if she wanted to but she's thankfully not that type of girl.
I like adding little details like that,shows some world building and shows how Jade is different from the rest of the world.