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Reviewer: tallie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2022 1:22 AM Title: Concerning Family

I don't need to tell you how well-done this is. But this chapter's got a very interesting reformat. Probably works better with the new site layout!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliment, but also for telling me about the format thing. It must be something new with the site, I'll try to poke around to see what might be causing that. It's not unreadable but I'd prefer it not look like that.

Reviewer: Spaceguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2022 6:33 PM Title: Concerning Family

Amazing story! You always write such good erotica. I get excited every time I see a new story of yours pop up. I would love to see a part 2 of this story with Lily ending up in Emma's stomach to follow the same fate as her mother. 

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