I'll tell you, I certainly don't mind seeing you focusing so much on the flashback chapters. Especially considering that Amoe is getting much screen time. :) To see Mark suffer so much at the hands and feet of easily the sweetest of his friends, is irony at it's finest. And the fact that through most if it she's been completely unaware makes it that much more devastating. 

These past few chapters have definitely showcased how this previously strong and independent person was completely broken down. And why he was willing to leave behind his friends, family and home country to make the perilous journey across the world. Just for the hope of regaining some of what was lost to him. Is there any chance that Tracy will feature in some chapters? Would love to learn more about how Mark ended up in her hands. And the events that lead up to her building him back up enough to attempt the smuggling. :)

In the meantime, I can't wait to see how things develop with Amoe. Your descriptions of everything that is happening both inside and outside the slipper have been pretty fantastic. Particularly when it comes to subtle shift in Mark's perspective. As he's started to find it harder and harder to see those around him as people. So much as godly beings. Who's toes can hardly even be bothered to acknowledge his existence. :)