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Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2021 12:50 PM Title: Chapter X-48: Slipping Her Mind - Part 1

Excellent chapter yet again! I'm definitely a bigger fan of the flashback half of this series. And I think it was a wise decision to split this current arc up into multiple chapters. It'll make it more easily digestible.

I think you did a great job paralleling the perspectives of Amoe and Mark. It made the unaware action feel more dynamic.

Personally, I think you've struck gold with your college arc cast of characters, and I hope you consider doing more with them after this whole story is finished up.

Looking forward to the next chapters in this arc!



Author's Response:

Hey Sheograth,

Thanks again for the review! These next few chapters are definitely going to be flashback, and honestly, the flashback chapters may end up being longer than current timeline.

Although i do like both stories myself :)

-kenny

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