Ohhh, you have no idea how happy I was to log onto the website and see that you had posted another chapter. This story has definitely become one of my all time shrunken men fictions. And one that I'm always anxiously looking forward to reading more of. So as nerve wracking as it can be, waiting to see what will come of our poor hero. I for one, never want you to feel as if can't take your time with things. :)

This chapter teased at something that I have desperately been wanting to see happen for quite a while now. In that you were given a glimmer of hope that one of Mark's would be tormentors will come to their senses and realize just how horrific their treatment of Mark really is. All the while wrestling with the notion that they love the idea of having someone so tiny and vulnerable willingly worship them. 

Much like with Amoe, there is a part of me that would love to see something far more deep and sensual develope between Mark and Diane. Perhaps the preassure that Sarah has been putting on her back fires. As she discovers the by now, largely broken Mark. Responds far far more strongly to acts of kindness, than cruelty. And that by simply easing up on him. He comes to truly see her as the first, real goddess in his life. Deserving of every ounce of worship and care that he could give her. To the point where he actually does want to stay with her. 

Would make for a heck of a twist, that's for sure. ^.^ But that's also the romantic in me talking. No matter how the story unfolds, I'm sure it will be amazing though. Please keep up the good work! 

On a side note. Please tell me that you aim to do a chapter at some point. Detailing the events that lead up to marks rescue from his "Friends" And his savior setting up his meeting with Diane and the Railroad. :)