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Reviewer: Robbie Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2020 8:19 PM Title: Chapter X-38: Amoe's gift

I have to vote for Amoe because it kind of makes sense that she should end up seeing mark again or possibly keeping him forever. My reason is that she seems the most genuine towards helping shrinkies but is unaware she is tormenting mark. i want to see more of her cruel kindness 



Author's Response:

Hey Robbie,

Cruel kindness indeed

kenny

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2020 5:42 AM Title: Chapter X-38: Amoe's gift

Hmm...I might have to change my vote to Linh. Amoe is one of my favorites, but I confess that I'm ready for a shift from all these people that are oblivious to the point of stupidity when it comes to not realizing what Mark wants. At least Linh won't care. And I'm not criticizing your writing at all! I just think Linh was the one that stood out compared to the others.



Author's Response:

In terms of the characters, alcohol has been involved, and tinies are still new to them - but yes, they are acting quite stupid.  I confess i do enjoy unaware a lot :p

In any case, noted!

 

 

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