Date: September 10 2020 4:30 AM Title: Chapter X-34: The Shower
Was going to request that Amoe be the one who gets their own chapter. Though it seems that this part of the story might be leading into Mark getting more alone time with her. I have to say that the whole trick Crystal did with using her hair to tie up mark was pretty ingenious. :)
Though I'm more than a little surprised that she put him in the soap. Considering how possesive she is becoming of him. I would think she wouldn't want the other women using Mark. Or for that matter, risking him being accidently killed or washed down the drain. That woman is something else.
Author's Response:
Hey Theo,
That women is something else! Ha!
Glad your enjoying it!
Date: June 18 2020 8:03 AM Title: Chapter X-34: The Shower
I'm sorry to hear that,your talent is great,hope everything will be fine.And because I like cruel thingsa292;so I like Lin and Sarah'mother very much,they have an frightening sense of bullying:)However,wish you good luck.
Author's Response:
Hey Wwsl,
I"m good now. Hope you're ok.
Linh is definitely a character i'd like to write about, and i promise you, if she's chosen, Mark will not be having fun. :p
Kenny
[Report This]Date: June 17 2020 9:00 PM Title: Chapter X-34: The Shower
Great chapter all around! It's very enjoyable to see characters like Amoe say playfully teasing things (in their eyes) that are actually terrifying for the tiny character. And unaware showers are always enjoyable concepts, and you're doing well with it so far.
As for characters, I'm partial to Ani, so anything with her would be good in my book. Though Amoe is a close second.
Hope you're feeling better!
Author's Response:
Hey Sheogorath,
Thanks! The shower chapter is actually suprisingly difficult for me to write for some reason, which added to the slow down. Trying to give the story some variety and not be 100% foot focused (although that's obvioulsy the theme).
Kenny
Date: June 16 2020 1:45 PM Title: Chapter X-34: The Shower
I am still glad that you are okay. And for a extra chapeter. Maybe a chapter with Kelly's foot where he marries it and ends up in a honey moon with her? Or perhaps a spin off with that? Glad that you are okay. One of my favorite stories.
Author's Response:
Hey Hunter,
I actually have thought a lot about the Kelly storyline. Regardless of what's the popular decision, i'm sure that she will be further written, either as part of a seperate story or here, i'm not entirely sure.
Kenny